Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a clear direct answer (yes/no or short statement) and then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep answers natural and under five sentences.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. In fact, I got it for my eighth birthday and rode it to school every day for two years. Because it was a small, blue bicycle with a basket, I felt proud and rode it even in the evenings.

提案: Again you repeated the question instead of answering. Provide a direct opinion (Yes/No/It depends) and then support it with specific reasons or examples, using linking words to connect ideas. Aim for natural vocabulary and concise structure.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people use them for short trips and commuting because traffic is heavy and cycling is economical; however, they are less common in rural areas due to long distances.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student's reply repeats the examiner's question rather than answering. This is a sentence structure/response error (ID 26). The appropriate response should be a complete declarative sentence in the past tense to match the question. Use 'had' (past tense of 'have') and include a subject 'I' to form a proper sentence. Suggestion: Answer briefly and directly using past tense, e.g., 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' or 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student's reply repeats the examiner's question instead of providing an answer. This is a sentence structure/response error (ID 26). The correct response should be a complete sentence expressing the student's opinion in the present tense. Include subject 'I' and an appropriate verb phrase, e.g., 'I think' or 'I don't think'. Suggestion: Respond directly, for example 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.' or 'No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country.'