Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a fuller, natural response: start with a topic sentence answering the question, then add 1–2 specific supporting details (e.g., what kind of bike, who gave it, how you used it, a memory). Use linking words like “and” or “because” to connect ideas. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences).

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle with training wheels that my parents bought me when I was six, and I rode it to the park every afternoon. Because I practiced a lot, I learned to ride without the training wheels by the end of summer.

提案: Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons, examples, or comparisons. Use linking words such as “because”, “for example”, or “however” to make your answer coherent. Mention who uses bikes, where they are used, or any trends to make the response specific and informative while keeping it concise.

例: Yes, I do. Bikes are quite popular, especially in cities, because many people use them to commute to work and avoid traffic. For example, in my city there are dedicated bike lanes and many students and office workers cycle daily.

× Yes, I did.

✓ Yes, I did.

The sentence correctly answers a past-tense question ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?') using the appropriate short answer 'Yes, I did.' No correction is needed. Suggestion: None.

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I do.

The sentence correctly answers a present-tense question ('Do you think bikes are popular in your country?') with the appropriate short answer 'Yes, I do.' No correction is needed. Suggestion: None.