Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer clearly responds to the question and gives reasons, but it can be more concise, better structured and use smoother linking words. Aim for 2–4 sentences: a clear topic sentence, followed by one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition ("it's too risky", "I I"). Use varied vocabulary (e.g., "couldn't afford" → "couldn't afford one"; "risky" → "dangerous").

例: No, I didn't have a bike as a child. My parents couldn't afford one, and they were also worried I might get injured, so they preferred I walk or use public transport instead.

提案: Your answer answers the question but is repetitive and lacks specific examples. Make a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons or examples using linking words (e.g., "because", "for example", "as a result"). Watch for hesitations and duplicate words. Use precise vocabulary ("commuting", "affordable", "convenient").

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are an affordable and convenient way to commute. For example, many people use bicycles to travel to work or school, especially in crowded cities where parking and traffic are problems.

× No, I didn't have any bike in my childhood because my parents couldn't afford it and they thought that it is too risky for me, that maybe I I got hurt or something, that's why they didn't.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike in my childhood because my parents couldn't afford one, and they thought it was too risky for me, that I might get hurt, so they didn't buy one.

Errors: 'any bike' is incorrect article/quantifier use; use 'a bike' or 'any bikes' depending on meaning. Also use 'one' as a substitute for 'a bike' later. 'it is too risky' should be 'it was too risky' to match past tense. 'maybe I I got hurt' has repetition and wrong verb form; use 'I might get hurt' or 'I would get hurt'. Combine clauses for clarity. Suggestions: use 'a bike' for singular countable nouns, match tense consistently (past), remove repeated words, and use modal 'might' for possibility.

× Yes, bikes are so popular in our country because it's it's making very easy to go somewhere for for a ride and people use it for their everyday offices and work. So yeah, I think it's it's very.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in our country because they make it very easy to go somewhere for a ride, and people use them for their daily commute and work. So yeah, I think they are.

Errors: 'it's it's making' shows pronoun-verb agreement and tense issues; 'bikes' is plural so refer with 'they' and plural verb 'make'. 'making very easy' lacks an object; use 'make it very easy'. 'for for a ride' has repetition. 'people use it' should be 'use them' to match plural 'bikes'. 'everyday offices and work' is unnatural; use 'daily commute and work'. 'it's it's very' incomplete and inconsistent; replace with 'they are' or complete adjective. Suggestions: ensure pronoun agrees with plural subject, use correct verb forms, avoid repetition, and use natural collocations like 'daily commute'.