Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更自然和连贯，避免语法错误与不相关内容。先直接回答问题（主题句），然后用一到两句补充细节。注意时态一致（过去时），不要出现无意义或错误的短语（如“password had their car their backs”）。可以说明谁买的、大约年龄、对那辆自行车的感受或用途，并用连接词如“because”或“so”来衔接原因。

例: Yes. I had a bike when I was about eight years old. My father bought it for me because I wanted to ride to a friend’s house, and I was very excited to learn how to ride it. It stayed with me until I started high school.

提案: 回答应更清晰、避免词汇错误（如将“bikes”误说成“bags”或“Iceland”），并使用连接词使句子流畅。先给出直接回答，然后用一两条具体细节支持（例如在学校、城市道路或公共交通中自行车的普及原因）。注意语法和单复数一致。

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, at my college many students commute by bicycle, and there are bike lanes and parking areas around campus. I often see dozens of bikes parked near the library.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

原句使用現在時(have)與問題的過去時態不一致。考官問的是“Did you have... when you were a child?”應使用過去式表示過去的狀態或經驗，故將have改為過去式had。建議：回答過去經驗時，一律使用過去時（例如：I had, I owned, I used to have）。

× When I was a child, my father bought a bike for me when I was almost 8 years old 'cause my password had their car their backs.

✓ When I was a child, my father bought a bike for me when I was almost eight years old because my parents had their car at the back.

原句有多處問題：1) 重複使用when造成冗餘；2) 'cause為口語縮寫，寫作或正式回答應用because；3) “password had their car their backs”可能是想表達“parents had their car at the back”，此處拼寫和詞語使用錯誤；4) 整體句子結構混亂。建議：用完整的because且正確拼寫parents，注意時態一致（過去式bought），將數字eight用單詞或數字皆可，但保持一致。可練習把想法先用簡單句構表達再合併。

× So I asked my dad bought it for me.

✓ So I asked my dad to buy it for me, and he did.

原句中同時出現asked和bought導致句子結構錯誤。表達“我請我爸買給我”應使用ask + to-infinitive（asked my dad to buy it for me）。若要表達結果需分句（and he did）或使用past tense正確連接。建議：掌握ask someone to do sth的句型。

× Yes of course Iceland bags are popular in my country now I'm a college student in my college there are so many bikes and out of our campus there also bags I can easily see in the road.

✓ Yes, of course bikes are popular in my country. Now that I'm a college student, there are so many bikes on my campus and I can also easily see bikes on the road outside the campus.

原句多處錯誤：1) “Iceland bags”顯然誤聽或拼寫，應為“bikes”；2) 缺少標點導致多個子句黏在一起；3) “in my college there are so many bikes and out of our campus there also bags”語序和詞語使用錯誤，應調整為有明確主語和介詞短語（on my campus, outside the campus, on the road）；4) 動詞時態使用現在時正確，但句子需分為兩個句子以清晰表達。建議：檢查關鍵單詞是否拼寫正確，使用標點分隔子句，使用介詞on/ outside配合場所名詞。