Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời rất ngắn và không trả lời rõ ràng câu hỏi. Bạn cần nói trực tiếp là có hay không có xe đạp khi còn nhỏ, sau đó thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết hỗ trợ (ví dụ ai tặng, thường đi đâu, kỷ niệm). Sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh từ không rõ nghĩa như “Yet.”

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My parents couldn't afford one, so I usually walked to school with my friends. However, I remember trying my neighbour's bike sometimes and feeling very excited when I managed to ride it.

提案: Câu trả lời rất lộn xộn, không rõ ý và thiếu nội dung cụ thể. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng (Yes/No + short reason), rồi đưa ra ví dụ hoặc so sánh cụ thể (ở thành phố hay nông thôn, vì lý do giao thông/giải trí/kinh tế). Tránh tiếng ừ ừ, nói chậm và mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in rural areas where people use them for daily errands. In cities, many people also cycle for short commutes because it's cheaper and saves time in traffic. For example, students often ride bikes to school and small shopkeepers use them to transport goods.

× Yet.

✓ Yes, I did.

The student responded with 'Yet,' which is incorrect in this context. The question asks about past possession; the appropriate short answer is 'Yes, I did.' This fixes sentence structure by providing a subject and auxiliary verb to form a complete response. Suggestion: use 'Yes, I did' for affirmative past possession or 'No, I didn't' for negative responses.

× In your country, uh, those you buy, uh, and heading for.

✓ In my country, bicycles are popular because many people buy them and use them to go to work or school.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. It uses 'your country' instead of 'my country' (wrong perspective) and fragments like 'those you buy' and 'heading for' that lack subjects and correct verb forms. The corrected sentence provides a clear subject, correct verb forms, and completes the intended meaning. Suggestion: state the country perspective as 'my country', use complete clauses, and use verbs like 'buy' and 'use' with objects to clarify actions.