Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence naming the clothes you prefer, then give one or two brief specific details. Correct vocabulary (e.g. “dishdasha”, “abaya”, “sandals”) and possessive forms should be used. Keep it to 1–3 sentences and avoid extra words.

例: I prefer traditional Kuwaiti clothes. For example, men often wear a dishdasha and women wear an abaya; I also like simple sandals for everyday wear.

提案: Open with a clear topic sentence stating your general preference, then add a short condition or example using linking words such as 'but' or 'however'. Correct grammar (subject–verb agreement, articles) and concise structure will improve clarity.

例: It depends on the occasion: I wear smart clothes for parties or formal events, but I usually choose casual clothes like jeans and a T-shirt for family gatherings.

提案: Give a direct yes/no and a short, clear explanation. Remove fillers and correct numerical phrasing (e.g. “four to six times per month”). Use one or two sentences only.

例: Yes, I do. I often wear T-shirts when I go to the shopping mall — about four to six times a month.

提案: Begin with a clear topic sentence describing the general pattern, then contrast with specific times using linking words like 'however' or 'but'. Use correct verb forms and concise time expressions.

例: It depends on the event: for parties I sometimes spend three to four hours choosing an outfit, but for a short walk I usually decide in two to four minutes.

提案: Answer directly and clearly. If there is a difference, explain briefly with specific examples and linking words. Use correct names for clothing and fix repetition and grammar.

例: Not really. However, at the weekend I often wear traditional Kuwaiti clothes such as a dishdasha, while on other days I choose clothes depending on where I am going.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence about your preference, then explain briefly using linking words. Use correct grammar and concise phrasing (e.g. 'white clothes' not just 'a white'). Avoid repeating words.

例: My choice of colour depends on the season. In summer I usually wear white clothes because they don't absorb sunlight, while in winter I prefer dark colours like black or brown because they feel warmer.

× Actually, I like to wear a traditional clothes in Kuwait's country like Dishdasha, Petra and the girl and Sandal.

✓ Actually, I like to wear traditional clothes in Kuwait, such as the dishdasha, the batoola and sandals.

The error involves singular/plural and word choice. 'a traditional clothes' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'clothes'; remove 'a' and use plural 'traditional clothes'. 'Kuwait's country' is unnatural; use 'Kuwait'. 'Petra and the girl and Sandal' seems to attempt names of traditional items: use correct terms and plurals ('batoola' or 'burqa' depending on intended item) and plural 'sandals'. Improve by matching singular/plural and using correct nouns.

× Depend if I will go to the party I should to a smart clothes but if I go to the something related to the family I casual like jeans and T-shirt.

✓ It depends: if I go to a party I should wear smart clothes, but if I go to a family gathering I wear casual clothes like jeans and a T-shirt.

Multiple issues: missing subject 'It depends' and incorrect modal/infinitive usage. 'I should to a smart clothes' incorrectly uses 'to' after 'should' and mixes singular/plural. Use 'should wear smart clothes'. Use article 'a party' and 'a T-shirt'. Also change 'something related to the family' to 'a family gathering'.

× Yes, I like Sometimes when I go to the shopping mall, I wear T-shirt, uh uh, four to six times beer a month. I wear the T-shirt.

✓ Yes. Sometimes when I go to the shopping mall, I wear a T-shirt about four to six times per month.

Tense mostly present simple is fine but sentence has extraneous words and wrong phrase 'four to six times beer a month'. Remove filler 'uh uh' and correct 'a T-shirt' with article. Use 'about four to six times per month' for frequency.

× Actually, sometime when I go to the party, uh, I take 3 to 4 hours to looking for what I will wear to this party.

✓ Actually, sometimes when I go to a party, I take 3 to 4 hours looking for what I will wear to the party.

After 'take 3 to 4 hours' the verb should be in the -ing form without 'to' ('looking'), not 'to looking'. Also use plural 'sometimes', article 'a party', and avoid repetition 'to this party' -> 'to the party'.

× But if I want to go to just walking, I spend 2 minutes or 4 minutes.

✓ But if I just go for a walk, I spend two to four minutes choosing clothes.

Original phrase 'go to just walking' is ungrammatical. Use 'go for a walk'. Also clarify what '2 minutes or 4 minutes' refers to: use 'two to four minutes'. Use words for numbers under ten in formal writing.

× No, but if in the weekend I usually wear dish dasha and Petra and eagle.

✓ No. On weekends I usually wear the dishdasha, the batoola and the agal.

Use plural/time expression 'On weekends' not 'in the weekend'. Correct names: 'dish dasha' -> 'dishdasha' (or 'dishdasha'), 'Petra' likely 'batoola', 'eagle' -> 'agal' (traditional headband). Use definite article 'the' with these traditional garments. Ensure plurality and correct nouns.

× This is the Kuwaitis clothes but in in different days dependent on where I will go.

✓ These are Kuwaiti clothes, but on other days it depends on where I am going.

'This is the Kuwaitis clothes' has subject/verb and adjective form errors: use plural 'these are' and adjective 'Kuwaiti' not 'Kuwaitis'. Remove duplicate 'in in'. Use 'on other days' and 'depends on where I am going' for natural structure.

× This actually depend on the season.

✓ This actually depends on the season.

Subject-verb agreement and verb form: 'depend' should be 'depends' to agree with singular subject 'this'. This is also present simple third-person singular, corrected by adding '-s'.

× In the summer I usually wear a white because it doesn't absorb the the sunlight.

✓ In summer I usually wear white because it doesn't absorb the sunlight.

Colour words used as adjectives do not need an article when referring to clothing in general: say 'wear white' not 'wear a white'. 'In summer' is more natural than 'In the summer' but both possible. Remove duplicate 'the the'.

× But in the winter I usually take a dark one like a black color or brown. That's the more comfortable to me in the winter.

✓ But in winter I usually wear darker colours like black or brown. Those are more comfortable for me in winter.

Use 'wear' rather than 'take' for clothing. 'a dark one like a black color or brown' is awkward: use 'darker colours like black or brown'. 'That's the more comfortable to me' should be plural 'Those are more comfortable for me'. Use 'for me' rather than 'to me' in this context.