Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more direct and fluent. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, um), correct grammar (e.g., 'I don't have one style'), and give one specific supporting detail or example. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

例: I usually wear a mix of skirts, jeans and T-shirts. For example, I tend to wear skirts for going out, jeans for everyday activities and T-shirts at home because they are comfortable.

提案: Give a clear preference and explain briefly with reasons. Avoid unclear references (e.g., '1U') and contradictory sentences. Use linking words like 'however' or 'but' when comparing options.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes for everyday life because they are easier to move in and suit my routine. However, I wear smart clothes for special events or when I need to make a good impression at school.

提案: Use correct tense and sentence structure. Give one specific reason or example why you like T-shirts and avoid repetition. Keep to 2–3 clear sentences with linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to wash. I wear them most days at home and when I work at the university because they suit my casual lifestyle.

提案: Answer directly and use correct verb forms: 'I don't spend'. Explain briefly when you do plan outfits if at all. Provide a clear example like preparing clothes the night before.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes. Usually I pick my outfit the night before if I have an important meeting, otherwise I choose something quickly in the morning.

提案: Give a clear, grammatical response. If you don't change styles, say so and give a short reason. Avoid unclear words and filler phrases. Use linking words to clarify contrast if necessary.

例: No, I don't change my style between weekdays and weekends because I prefer to be comfortable every day. The only difference is that on weekends I might wear more casual items like sweatpants.

提案: State your preferred color clearly and give specific examples of items or patterns. Avoid filler words and ensure correct word choices ('I like black' vs 'being close'). Use one or two supporting details.

例: My favorite color is pink, so I have many pink clothes such as a pink sweater and a pink patterned dress. I especially like garments with pink glitter or floral prints.

× I have, I haven't, uh, one style.

✓ I don't have just one style.

The original is a fragmented and contradictory sentence combining 'I have' and 'I haven't'. This is a sentence structure error; use a clear negative construction 'I don't have' plus 'just one style' to convey the intended meaning. Suggestion: keep subject and auxiliary together and avoid repeating conflicting phrases.

× I always wear in a lot of styles.

✓ I always wear many different styles.

The phrase 'wear in' is incorrect here. This is a sentence structure error; use 'wear' with an object phrase such as 'many different styles' to express variety. Suggestion: remove the preposition 'in' and use a quantifier and adjective to describe 'styles'.

× Or maybe it's school.

✓ At school, I wear smart clothes.

'Or maybe it's school' is unclear and structurally odd in response to the question. Reframe the idea with a clear clause: 'At school, I wear smart clothes.' This fixes the sentence structure and clarifies the context.

× I like to wear smart clothes because we have 1U and to buy it in real life.

✓ I like to wear smart clothes because we have uniforms and we have to buy them in real life.

The original misuses '1U' (likely 'uniform') and mixes singular pronouns with plural nouns. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and word choice. Use the plural 'uniforms' and plural pronoun 'them' to agree with the plural noun. Also replace 'to buy it in real life' with 'we have to buy them in real life' for clarity.

× I like to wear comfortable and casual clothes because it's so casual, you know?

✓ I like to wear comfortable, casual clothes because they are more relaxed.

The original repeats 'casual' and uses 'it's' awkwardly. This is a sentence structure issue. Replace the vague 'it's so casual' with a clear explanation: 'they are more relaxed.' Use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to 'clothes'.

× My wardrobe, yeah.

✓ Yes, my wardrobe does.

'My wardrobe, yeah' is a fragment. Use a full reply such as 'Yes, my wardrobe does' or 'Yes, I have a large wardrobe.' This fixes pronoun reference and creates a complete sentence.

× And I wearing it every day at home, at working at the university.

✓ And I wear them every day at home and when I work at the university.

'I wearing' is incorrect because a finite auxiliary is missing; this is a verb form error. Use the simple present 'I wear' and plural pronoun 'them' for 'T-shirts'. Also replace 'at working' with 'when I work' to form a correct clause.

× I always wear into shirts.

✓ I always wear shirts.

'Wear into shirts' uses an incorrect preposition. Remove 'into' and use 'wear shirts' for correct prepositional usage.

× No, I don't spending a lot of time of choosing my clothes.

✓ No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing my clothes.

The auxiliary 'do' requires the base form 'spend', not the '-ing' form. This is a verb form error. Also remove the unnecessary preposition 'of' before 'choosing'.

× I always so think about it.

✓ I don't usually think about it much.

The original word order 'I always so think' is incorrect. Rephrase to a natural sentence: 'I don't usually think about it much.' This corrects adverb placement and overall sentence structure.

× Or the night before I need to close something.

✓ Or the night before, I need to choose something.

'Close something' is likely a misused verb; 'choose' fits the context of selecting clothes. This is a sentence structure/word choice error. Use 'choose' and add commas for clarity.

× No, I, I don't, uh, I like to rain not depending on weekends or day offs.

✓ No, I don't change what I wear depending on weekends or days off.

The original uses 'like to rain' which is incorrect and unclear. This is an incorrect verb choice and sentence structure issue. Replace with 'change what I wear' and use 'days off' (two words) for correct expression.

× I like being close because pink is my favorite color and I have a lot of clothes.

✓ I like wearing pink because it is my favorite color and I have a lot of pink clothes.

'Like being close' is likely intended as 'like being close [in color]' or 'like wearing clothes'—it is incorrect. This is a verb and word choice error. Use 'like wearing pink' and clarify that many of the clothes are pink. Ensure pronoun agreement: 'it is my favorite color.'

× Uh, with pink glitter, maybe with pink drawing, yeah.

✓ For example, clothes with pink glitter or pink prints.

'Pink drawing' is unnatural; use 'pink prints' or 'pink patterns'. This fixes incorrect noun usage and makes the description more natural. Also remove filler words like 'uh' and 'yeah' in formal responses.