Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and use correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh), correct negatives (neither...nor), and give one specific reason or example. Use linking words if adding detail.

例: I prefer simple, casual clothes that are neither too tight nor too baggy. For example, I often wear loose cotton dresses because they are comfortable for daily activities and easy to care for.

提案: Use accurate grammar (articles, plural agreement) and a clearer explanation. Begin with a direct statement, then give a specific reason using a linking word (because/so).

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart, tight outfits because I do a lot of household chores. Therefore, I choose clothes that allow me to move freely and stay cool.

提案: Keep the answer relevant and polite. Avoid unnecessary comparisons or negative comments about brands. Use singular/plural correctly and give a brief reason or example of when you wear T-shirts.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. Right now I am wearing a Reebok T-shirt because it is comfortable for running errands. I usually choose plain or simple branded T-shirts for everyday wear.

提案: Answer the question directly. Explain briefly how much time you spend and why, using clear vocabulary (shop, haggle, choose). Avoid unclear idioms and unclear narration.

例: Not really; I don't spend much time choosing clothes, but I often bargain when shopping at local markets. If a seller shows me an item I don't like, I negotiate the price or ask for a different one before I decide to buy.

提案: Be specific and coherent. State clearly what you wear on weekdays vs weekends, use correct vocabulary (casual, smart, pajamas) and avoid confusing phrases. Use linking words like 'on weekdays' and 'on weekends'.

例: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear slacks and T-shirts because I need comfortable clothes for work and chores. On weekends I dress more casually—sometimes shorts and a vest or a relaxed T-shirt—when I stay at home or meet friends.

提案: Keep the answer relevant and avoid confusing metaphors. Start with a clear topic sentence naming colors you like, then give a specific reason or example. Limit repetitions and fillers.

例: I like black and white clothes because they are easy to match and look neat. For example, I often wear a white shirt with black trousers for a simple, smart look.

× I like to wear a simple casual dress, so not too skinny neither too baggy.

✓ I like to wear a simple, casual dress, so not too skinny nor too baggy.

The connector 'neither...nor' or 'not...nor' is correct instead of 'neither' alone after 'not'. Also comma needed between adjectives 'simple' and 'casual'. Suggestion: use 'not too skinny nor too baggy' and separate coordinate adjectives with a comma.

× Uh, that means quite quite comfortable to wear.

✓ Uh, that means it is quite comfortable to wear.

The sentence is missing a subject pronoun and a verb. Insert 'it is' to form a complete clause. Suggestion: always include the subject and auxiliary verb for clarity.

× And I don't think much about my interesting sense, rather.

✓ And I don't think much about my sense of style, rather.

'Interesting sense' is unnatural; 'sense of style' is the correct noun phrase. 'Rather' is awkwardly placed; keep it at end only if contrasting. Suggestion: use idiomatic phrase 'sense of style' and remove 'interesting'.

× I usually prefer the comfortable clothes rather than a classy and skinny dresses because I do quite some household work.

✓ I usually prefer comfortable clothes rather than classy, skinny dresses because I do quite a bit of household work.

Mix of singular/plural and quantifier errors: 'the comfortable clothes' should be 'comfortable clothes' (general), 'a classy and skinny dresses' mixes article with plural; change to 'classy, skinny dresses'. 'Quite some' is nonstandard in this context; use 'quite a bit of'. Suggestion: remove unnecessary articles and match number.

× So yes, for that energy I need.

✓ So yes, I need that for energy.

Word order is incorrect in English; pronoun and object placement should be 'I need that for energy' or 'I need that for my energy levels'. Suggestion: follow Subject-Verb-Object order.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts and still now I'm wearing one T-shirts of Reebok.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts and even now I'm wearing a Reebok T-shirt.

'Still now' is nonstandard; 'even now' is better. 'one T-shirts' mixes singular/plural; use 'a Reebok T-shirt'. Suggestion: ensure number agreement and use idiomatic time expressions.

× You might heard that brand name.

✓ You might have heard of that brand name.

Modal perfect 'might have heard' is required for past possibility. Also, use 'heard of' when referring to familiarity with a brand. Suggestion: use correct modal perfect and preposition.

× My brother here is also wearing AT shirt named Yogi, which is a poor band and he bought that dress in just ₹100.

✓ My brother here is also wearing an AT shirt called Yogi, which is a poor brand and he bought it for just ₹100.

Article 'an' before vowel sound, use 'called' for names, 'band' should be 'brand', 'that dress' -> 'it', and 'in just' -> 'for just'. Suggestion: fix articles, word choice, and preposition for price.

× I do bargaining a lot.

✓ I bargain a lot.

'Do bargaining' is incorrect collocation. The verb is 'bargain'; use simple present 'I bargain a lot'. Suggestion: use correct verb form instead of gerund with 'do'.

× Going to break a demon up, break your demand up and do bargaining.

✓ I go to bargain, try to lower the price, and negotiate a lot.

Original is unclear and contains wrong words ('demon' instead of 'demand'). Provide clearer verbs: 'bargain', 'lower the price', 'negotiate'. Suggestion: choose appropriate verbs and form parallel structure.

× He give me one dress, I say no that is not the fresh and he again have that fresh and I buy that.

✓ He gives me a dress, I say no, that is not fresh, and he gets a fresher one and I buy it.

Tense and subject-verb agreement errors: 'He give' -> 'He gives'. Articles and noun forms: 'one dress' -> 'a dress'; 'the fresh' -> 'fresh'; 'have that fresh' -> 'gets a fresher one'; pronoun 'that' -> 'it'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and proper article use; use clearer sequence of actions.

× I usually wear a different different kind of clothes in weekdays and weekends.

✓ I usually wear different kinds of clothes on weekdays and weekends.

'a different different kind of clothes' mixes singular 'a kind' with plural 'clothes' and repeats 'different'. Use plural 'kinds of clothes' and preposition 'on' for days. Suggestion: match number and use 'on weekdays/weekends'.

× Like I am wearing slacks and T-shirts now and weekend I sometimes wear slacks but sometimes worse happened and one ganji too and repeating again.

✓ For example, I am wearing slacks and a T-shirt now; on weekends I sometimes wear slacks, sometimes a vest (ganji), and often repeat outfits.

Many issues: plural/singular ('T-shirts' vs 'a T-shirt'), preposition 'on weekends', unclear phrase 'worse happened' probably meant 'sometimes wear a vest', and 'repeating again' redundant. Suggestion: use clear examples, correct articles, and avoid redundancy.

× Personally, to be honest, my favorite animal is zebra.

✓ Personally, to be honest, my favorite animal is the zebra.

When referring to a species in general, use 'the' + singular noun: 'the zebra' or say 'zebras'. Suggestion: use 'the zebra' or 'zebras' for general statements.

× So I, I repeat, I try myself to be a zebra.

✓ So, I repeat, I try to make myself like a zebra.

'Try myself to be' is incorrect reflexive construction. Use 'try to make myself like' or 'try to be like'. Suggestion: use 'try to be like a zebra' or 'try to make myself like a zebra'.

× Sometimes I wear black and sometimes I wear white.

✓ Sometimes I wear black and sometimes I wear white.

This sentence is acceptable; colors used as nouns do not need articles here. No correction necessary.

× So so that kind of dress I love very much.

✓ So I really love that kind of clothing.

'So so' is redundant; word order 'that kind of dress I love very much' is awkward. Use 'I really love that kind of clothing' or 'I love that kind of dress very much'. Suggestion: simplify and use natural adverb placement.