Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason or example. Use plural agreement (e.g., "feel relaxed in them") and limit to 2–3 sentences.

例: I prefer comfortable clothes like shorts and T-shirts because they let me move freely and keep me cool. For example, I often wear a cotton T-shirt and shorts when I study at home because they help me stay relaxed and focused.

提案: Avoid awkward phrasing and redundancy. Use linking words to contrast and give a brief reason. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use natural collocations (e.g., "dress smartly").

例: It depends on the occasion. I usually prefer casual clothes because they're comfortable, but I dress smartly for meetings or formal events because first impressions matter.

提案: Reduce repetition and combine reasons into one clear sentence. Give a specific detail about the material or style to make the answer more informative.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and often made of soft cotton. I especially prefer plain crew-neck T-shirts for everyday wear because they are easy to match with jeans.

提案: Be concise and avoid philosophical digressions. Give a short reason and one specific example of how you choose outfits to make it concrete.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I prefer simple outfits. For instance, I usually pick a clean T-shirt and jeans in the morning so I can be ready quickly.

提案: Clarify and correct vocabulary (e.g., "work" not "go office", "trousers" or "jeans" not "breast pants"). Use linking words and specific contrasts in 2–3 sentences.

例: Yes. On weekdays I wear smart-casual clothes for work, such as a shirt and trousers, while on weekends I usually wear casual T-shirts and jeans when I meet friends.

提案: Avoid unnecessary enthusiasm and repetition. State your preference clearly and give a concise reason or frequency. Use correct tense and natural phrasing.

例: My favorite colour is black because it's versatile and easy to match. I usually wear black T-shirts and jeans three or four days a week because they suit most occasions.

× They are quite comfortable for me and I feel very relaxed in it.

✓ They are quite comfortable for me and I feel very relaxed in them.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'shorts and T-shirts' which is plural, so use 'them' for plural objects. Also 'for me' is acceptable. Suggestion: match pronoun number to its antecedent (singular/plural).

× I have to visit smart clothes because it matters in this situation to have wearing smart clothes.

✓ I have to wear smart clothes because it is important in this situation to wear smart clothes.

'Visit smart clothes' is wrong; use the verb 'wear' for clothing. 'It matters' should be 'it is important' for clarity. 'To have wearing' is ungrammatical; use the infinitive 'to wear'. Suggestion: use 'wear' with clothing and choose correct infinitive forms for purpose or necessity statements.

× I usually prefer wearing comfortable and casual clothes, but in a meeting or in any event, I have to visit smart clothes because it matters in this situation to have wearing smart clothes.

✓ I usually prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes, but in a meeting or at an event, I have to wear smart clothes because it is important to dress smartly in that situation.

After 'prefer' both 'to + verb' and 'verb+ing' are possible, but 'prefer to wear' is more natural here. Also 'in any event' is better as 'at an event'. 'Dress smartly' is a natural collocation. Suggestion: use 'prefer to wear' for clear simple statements and correct prepositions ('at an event').

× Yes, I do like wearing T-shirts because they are very comfortable and the material of T-shirt is quite soft so I like wearing T-shirts.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are very comfortable and the material of a T-shirt is quite soft, so I enjoy wearing them.

Use the article 'a' with singular countable noun 'T-shirt' when speaking about the material in general: 'the material of a T-shirt'. Also avoid repeating 'I like wearing T-shirts' twice; combine clauses and use 'them' for the plural pronoun. Suggestion: vary phrasing and use articles with singular countable nouns.

× I think spending more time on choosing clothes is not beneficial for me.

✓ I think spending a lot of time choosing clothes is not beneficial for me.

'Spending more time on choosing clothes' is awkward; 'spending a lot of time choosing clothes' is more natural in present tense statements. Suggestion: use natural collocations like 'spending a lot of time choosing' and avoid unnecessary prepositions.

× Regardless of what I'm wearing is not important.

✓ What I'm wearing is not important.

The phrase 'Regardless of' must be followed by a noun phrase; as written the sentence is ungrammatical. Omitting 'Regardless of' or rephrasing to 'Regardless of what I'm wearing, it is not important' would work. Suggestion: use correct sentence structure when using 'regardless of' or simplify the clause.

× My personality is much more important than what I'm wearing.

✓ My personality is much more important than what I am wearing.

Contraction 'I'm' is acceptable but inconsistent; expand to 'I am' for formality or keep contraction consistently. Grammatically the sentence is correct; suggestion: maintain consistent register. (No grammatical change required beyond consistency.)

× Yes, I do wear different style of clothes on weekdays and weekends.

✓ Yes, I do wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends.

'Different style' should be plural 'different styles' because it refers to multiple kinds of clothing across days. Suggestion: match noun number to the meaning (multiple styles => plural).

× On weekdays I used to go office so I more oftenly wear T-shirts and breast pants.

✓ On weekdays I go to the office, so I more often wear T-shirts and trousers.

'Used to' implies a past habitual action; here present routine is intended, so use present simple 'I go'. Add preposition 'to' before 'the office'. 'More oftenly' is incorrect; use 'more often' or 'usually'. 'Breast pants' is incorrect vocabulary; likely 'trousers' or 'pants'. Suggestion: use present simple for routines, correct adverb forms and common clothing vocabulary.

× Whereas on weekends I used to go for party with my friends so I use casual like T-shirts or shirts.

✓ On weekends I go to parties with my friends, so I wear casual clothes like T-shirts or shirts.

Again 'used to' wrongly implies past; present simple 'I go' fits habitual weekend activities. Use 'go to parties' not 'go for party'. 'I use casual' is incorrect; use 'I wear casual clothes'. Suggestion: use appropriate verbs for activities ('go to parties') and 'wear' for clothing.

× My favorite color is black. I used to wear black T-shirts and jeans and my very favorite color on in seven days a week.

✓ My favorite color is black. I wear black T-shirts and jeans very often, and it is my favorite color every day of the week.

'Used to' is wrong for habitual present; use present simple 'I wear'. Phrases like 'my very favorite color on in seven days a week' are ungrammatical. Replace with 'it is my favorite color every day of the week' or 'I wear it most days.' Suggestion: use clear time adverbials and present simple for current habits.

× I used to wear black color three or four days a week, so I like black color a lot.

✓ I wear black three or four days a week, so I like the color black a lot.

Do not use 'used to' for present habits; use 'I wear'. 'Black color' is redundant; 'the color black' or simply 'black' is correct. Suggestion: simplify noun phrases and use present simple for current habits.