Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct topic sentence and add one specific supporting detail. Avoid short fragments and redundant fillers. Use plural/singular consistently and correct small grammar errors (e.g., "T-shirts" not "T-shirt").

例: I usually wear casual clothes, such as T-shirts and baggy pants. For example, I prefer cotton T-shirts because they are breathable and baggy trousers because they are comfortable for walking around.

提案: Start with a clear direct answer (no conjunction at the start) and then give a specific reason with a linking word. Keep it to two or three sentences maximum.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes. They are more practical for my daily activities and I feel more relaxed in them, so I usually choose practical fabrics and loose fits.

提案: Give a clearer, single-sentence topic response, then add a specific condition with a linking word. Avoid one-word answers like 'Yes, but sometimes no.'

例: I generally like wearing T-shirts, but it depends on the weather; when it is cold or raining I choose jackets or sweaters instead.

提案: Provide a complete sentence and expand with a specific detail (how long or what you consider). Correct small grammar errors ("I want to look good").

例: Yes, I usually spend about ten to fifteen minutes choosing my clothes because I want to look neat and match my outfit for the occasion.

提案: Answer directly and use clearer linking words. Correct unclear phrases (e.g., "crush casually clothes" is unclear). Be specific about the differences and give one brief reason.

例: Yes, on weekdays I wear comfortable clothes for school, such as jeans and a T-shirt, but at the weekend I dress more neatly when I go to church, choosing a smart-casual shirt and trousers.

提案: Give a direct topic sentence and a brief, specific reason. Fix grammar and agreement ("they" instead of "it", and "suit" → "suit" with correct phrasing).

例: I prefer black and blue because they are versatile and match most of my other clothes, so they make it easy to put outfits together.

× I like wearing T-shirt or pants, baggy pants like that, yes.

✓ I like wearing T-shirts or pants, baggy pants like that, yes.

Use plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally about types of clothing. Countable nouns referring to general preferences typically take plural form. Suggestion: say 'T-shirts' for general preference or 'a T-shirt' if referring to a single item.

× But I prepare comfortable and casual clothes because they are more practical and I feel relaxed in them.

✓ But I prefer comfortable and casual clothes because they are more practical and I feel relaxed in them.

The verb 'prepare' is incorrect in this context; the student means preference. Use 'prefer' in present simple to describe habitual preference. Suggestion: use 'prefer' to express choice or habitual liking.

× Yes, but sometimes no. Depends on the weather when I go out or occasionally.

✓ Yes, but sometimes not. It depends on the weather when I go out and occasionally I don't wear one.

Fragment 'Depends on the weather' lacks subject; add 'It'. Use 'not' instead of 'no' to negate verb phrase. Clarify sentence by adding subject and complete clause. Suggestion: use full sentences: 'It depends on the weather.'

× Yes, because I want look good with my outfit.

✓ Yes, because I want to look good in my outfit.

Missing 'to' before the verb 'look' (infinitive). Also use preposition 'in' rather than 'with' to say wearing an outfit makes you look good. Suggestion: use 'want to [verb]' and 'look good in my outfit'.

× Yes, I wear comfortable clothes when I go to school, but the weekends I wear crush casually clothes when I go to the church.

✓ Yes, I wear comfortable clothes when I go to school, but on weekends I wear more casual clothes when I go to church.

Several issues: add preposition 'on' before 'weekends'; adjective order and word choice: 'more casual' or 'casual' rather than 'crush casually clothes'; remove article 'the' before 'church' when speaking generally. Suggestion: say 'on weekends' and 'casual clothes' and omit 'the' before 'church' in general statements.

× I like black and blue colors because it's perfect suit my outfit.

✓ I like black and blue because they perfectly suit my outfit.

Problems: 'colors' unnecessary after color names in this context. Subject-verb agreement: 'they' to refer to two colors. Use adverb 'perfectly' to modify 'suit'. Also 'suit' requires plural subject or 'suits' with singular; here 'they suit'. Suggestion: use 'they perfectly suit my outfit' or 'it perfectly suits my outfit' if referring to a color combination.