Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the response grammatically correct, concise and clear. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details. Avoid unclear phrases like “to be stressed” and correct verb forms (e.g., “interested”).

例: I’m interested in fashion. Usually I prefer dresses for formal occasions and blouses with pants for everyday wear because they look polished yet comfortable.

提案: Correct subject–verb agreement and tighten the sentence. Add a brief reason with a linking word (because, so) and one specific example to support your preference.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they give me confidence and allow me to move freely; for example, I often wear jeans and a soft sweater when I’m meeting friends.

提案: Use complete sentences and correct negatives. Provide a short reason and an example to add depth. Use a linking word like ‘but’ or ‘however’ appropriately.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, but I don’t like baggy ones because they look shapeless; I usually choose fitted cotton T-shirts instead.

提案: Fix grammar (articles, plural forms) and be more specific about what ‘important events’ mean. Use a linking word (but) and give an example of how you decide for each situation.

例: I spend a lot of time choosing clothes for important events like weddings or job interviews, but on normal days I pick something quickly, such as jeans and a T-shirt.

提案: Make the answer concise and correct verb forms. State the contrast clearly with a linking word (because/so) and give specific examples of weekday and weekend outfits.

例: Yes. On weekdays I wear formal, presentable clothes for work, such as a blouse and tailored trousers; on weekends I wear comfortable outfits like leggings and a hoodie.

提案: Improve grammar and phrasing, and be more specific about shades and why they suit you. Use linking words like ‘because’ and give one or two concrete colour examples with context.

例: I prefer warm colours that make my skin look healthy, such as coral red and warm orange, because they brighten my complexion when I go out in daylight.

× I have been interest in clothes style but usually I like dress and also to be stressed like blouse and pants.

✓ I have been interested in clothing styles, but usually I like dresses and also things like blouses and pants.

Use the past participle 'interested' after 'have been' (adjective use). 'Clothes style' is awkward; use 'clothing styles'. 'Dress' should be plural 'dresses' to match general preference. 'To be stressed like blouse and pants' is unclear; likely meant 'things like blouses and pants' or 'styles such as blouses and pants'. Improve word choice and plural forms.

× I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because it give me so much confidence and also comfort.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes because they give me so much confidence and comfort.

Subject 'comfortable, casual clothes' is plural, so the verb should be 'give' (not 'gives'). Also replace 'it' with 'they' to agree with plural noun. Remove redundant 'also' and streamline to 'confidence and comfort' for clarity.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirt but I not really like baggy T-shirt.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, but I don't really like baggy T-shirts.

Use plural 'T-shirts' for general statements. 'I not really like' is ungrammatical; use the auxiliary 'do' in present simple negative: 'I don't really like'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct negative formation.

× On important event I I spend a lot of time choosing clothes, but on normal day I just choose a random clothes.

✓ On important occasions I spend a lot of time choosing clothes, but on a normal day I just choose random clothes.

Use plural 'occasions' or 'an important occasion' for generalization. Remove duplicate 'I'. Use article 'a' with 'normal day'. 'A random clothes' is wrong: 'clothes' is plural, so no 'a'; use 'random clothes' or 'a random outfit'.

× Yes because on weekdays I going I'm going to work so I have to wear a formal dress and more presentable and on weekends I usually wear comfortable and casual. Yes.

✓ Yes, because on weekdays I'm going to work, so I have to wear formal clothes and be more presentable, and on weekends I usually wear comfortable, casual clothes.

Fix verb phrase: use contraction 'I'm' (I am) and remove redundant 'I going'. 'Wear a formal dress' limits to one item; better 'wear formal clothes'. 'More presentable' needs 'be' to form 'be more presentable'. Add commas and repeat 'clothes' or use 'clothes' at end for clarity.

× I like colors that make my skin look bright and healthy. I look I'm suitable in red color, orange color, or more to warm tone color.

✓ I like colors that make my skin look bright and healthy. I think red or orange suit me, or other warm tones.

'I look I'm suitable in' is ungrammatical; use 'I think ... suit me' for color suitability. 'Red color' and 'orange color' are redundant; use 'red' and 'orange'. 'More to warm tone color' is awkward — use 'other warm tones' or 'warm tones'.