Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and correct minor grammar (e.g., 'clothing' singular). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific example and a linking phrase. Keep to 2–4 sentences and avoid repetition (you said 'walking' and 'running' twice).

例: I prefer simple, practical clothing because I'm an active person. For example, I usually wear breathable sportswear or jeans and trainers when I go out, so I can walk or cycle comfortably.

提案: Shorten and avoid repetition; use a linking word to connect reason and example. Correct slight awkward phrasing like 'run around' repeated. Provide a specific example of what you consider 'comfortable'.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I walk and cycle a lot. For instance, I often wear a light T‑shirt and comfortable trainers so I can move easily during the day.

提案: Avoid exaggerated claims and filler words ('uh', 'I think'). Use a clear topic sentence, then give two concise supporting points with linking words. Be specific about the 'functions' or 'creative ways'.

例: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts because they are comfortable and versatile. For example, you can dress them up with a blazer for a casual smart look or wear them alone for everyday comfort.

提案: Grammar: use 'who don't' → 'who didn't' or 'that don't' and avoid repeating 'comfortable and convenient'. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give a brief reason and an example of what you choose.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because my family didn't prioritize fashion. Usually I just grab a simple T‑shirt and jeans that are comfortable for that day's activities.

提案: Be concise and correct small errors ('depending on the week' → 'on weekdays and weekends'; 'AT shirt' likely 'a T‑shirt'). Use linking words and provide a clear contrast between weekdays/weekends and events.

例: Not really — I don't change style just because it's a weekday or weekend, but I dress according to the event. For formal occasions I wear a shirt and trousers, whereas for casual meetups I usually wear a T‑shirt and jeans.

提案: Remove fillers ('umm') and correct awkward phrasing ('the darker the clothes the easier it is, so absorbs the heat'). Start with a topic sentence, then briefly explain the reason with a linking word and a specific example of colours.

例: I used to prefer dark colours like black, but now I wear lighter colours because Taiwan is very hot. For instance, I often choose white or pale blue shirts to stay cooler in the sun.

× I like wearing simpler clothes because I am more of an active person.

✓ I like wearing simpler clothes because I am more of an active person.

No change needed. 'Like' + verb-ing is correct to express preference; sentence is grammatical.

× Whenever I go out, I would be walking around and running around, so I would prefer to wear clothings that is convenient for me to move around in.

✓ Whenever I go out, I walk and run around, so I prefer to wear clothing that is convenient for me to move around in.

Issues: unnecessary use of 'would' (modal misuse) and incorrect plural/word form 'clothings' and subject-verb agreement 'that is' referring to plural idea. Corrections: use simple present 'walk and run' for habitual actions; use 'prefer' not 'would prefer' for general preference; use uncountable 'clothing' or plural 'clothes'; change 'is' to 'are' if 'clothes' used. Suggestion: use simple present for habits and correct noun forms.

× I would prefer to wear clothings that is convenient for me to move around in.

✓ I prefer to wear clothing that is convenient for me to move around in.

'Clothings' is not standard English; use uncountable 'clothing' or 'clothes'. 'That is' mismatches if plural; with 'clothing' use 'is'. Also prefer simple present for habitual preference.

× I prefer wearing comfortable clothes because when I'm outside I usually walk around a lot and run around, and I also use bicycles to go from point A to point B, so it is going to be very inconvenient if I'm not wearing more casual clothes.

✓ I prefer wearing comfortable clothes because when I'm outside I usually walk and run around, and I also ride a bicycle to get from point A to point B, so it is very inconvenient if I'm not wearing casual clothes.

Issues: 'use bicycles' is unnatural; use 'ride a bicycle' or 'cycle'. 'go from...to...' better as 'get from...to...'. 'is going to be' is awkward for general statement; use 'is'. 'more casual clothes' redundant with 'more'; use 'casual clothes'. Use simple present for habitual/general truths.

× Yes, I do like wearing T-shirts, and I believe there isn't anyone who dislike them because they are, I think, one of the best inventions of all time.

✓ Yes, I do like wearing T-shirts, and I believe there isn't anyone who dislikes them because they are, I think, one of the best inventions of all time.

Subject-verb agreement: 'anyone' is singular so the verb should be 'dislikes' not 'dislike'. Keep 'them' for T-shirts (plural semantic) but verb after 'anyone who' agrees with singular 'anyone'.

× It's very convenient. It's, uh, simple. It never goes out of style.

✓ They are very convenient and simple; they never go out of style.

Pronoun reference: original uses singular 'It' for T-shirts (plural). Use 'they' to refer to T-shirts and combine short fragments for smoother speech.

× There are lots of creative ways that you can wear it and lots of functions.

✓ There are lots of creative ways that you can wear them and many functions.

Pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to match plural 'T-shirts'. 'Lots of functions' is acceptable but 'many functions' is more natural. Ensure pronoun number matches noun.

× Because I grew up in a family who don't really prioritize fashion, I do not spend too much time choosing my clothes.

✓ Because I grew up in a family that doesn't really prioritize fashion, I do not spend too much time choosing my clothes.

Use 'family that' (collective noun) and singular verb 'doesn't' for standard American/British English; 'who' is used for people but 'family' as a unit takes 'that' and singular agreement.

× I just pick out whatever is in front of me and whatever is comfortable and convenient for the day.

✓ I just pick out whatever is in front of me and whatever is comfortable and convenient for the day.

Sentence is acceptable; no change needed. 'Pick out' and adjectives are correct.

× I do not wear a different style of clothes depending on the week, but I do have a different set of style whenever I'm attending different events.

✓ I don't wear a different style of clothes depending on the week, but I do have a different style whenever I attend different events.

Use simple present for habitual actions: 'attend' instead of 'I'm attending' for general cases. 'a different set of style' is unidiomatic; use 'a different style'.

× If it's a more formal event I would be wearing more formal clothes, but if it's just a casual gathering with my friends I would just get AT shirt and jeans.

✓ If it's a more formal event, I wear more formal clothes, but if it's just a casual gathering with my friends I just wear a T-shirt and jeans.

Avoid conditional 'would' when stating usual behavior; use simple present 'I wear'. 'get AT shirt' is unclear and likely mis-said; replace with 'wear a T-shirt'. Add comma after conditional clause.

× What colour clothes do you like? I used to like darker clothes, usually black, but because I am living in Taiwan currently and the weather is very hot and we know that umm the darker the clothes the easier it is, so absorbs the heat.

✓ I used to prefer darker clothes, usually black, but because I am living in Taiwan now and the weather is very hot, darker clothes absorb heat more easily.

Sentence had awkward phrasing and incorrect word order like 'the darker the clothes the easier it is, so absorbs the heat.' Reorder to 'darker clothes absorb heat more easily'. Use 'prefer' for habitual preference; 'currently' or 'now' fine. Remove filler 'umm'.

× So I would wear more light colored clothing nowadays.

✓ So I wear lighter-coloured clothing nowadays.

Use 'wear' simple present for current habitual action. 'More light colored' is awkward; use 'lighter-coloured' (or 'lighter colored') and 'clothing' is uncountable. Also 'would' unnecessary here.