Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct topic sentence and add one or two specific details to explain why you like dresses. Avoid short, single-word answers and keep to under five sentences.

例: I prefer wearing dresses because they are comfortable and easy to style. For example, a simple cotton dress is cool in summer and looks neat for casual outings.

提案: Answer directly, correct vocabulary and grammar, and add a reason with a linking word. Replace unclear words (e.g., 'cage with') and reduce hesitations.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they allow me to move freely and feel relaxed when I study or run errands.

提案: Use correct verb forms and include a brief additional detail or example. Make the sentence natural and concise.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to wash. For instance, I often wear a cotton T-shirt when I go for a walk.

提案: Remove fillers, use correct verbs, and give a clear reason with a linking phrase. Be specific about when or why you take time choosing clothes.

例: Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I want to match colors and feel confident. For example, I usually spend 15–20 minutes picking an outfit before going out.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct agreement and add a brief reason or example. Include a linking word for clarity.

例: Yes, I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends because my weekday outfits are more formal for work, while weekends are more relaxed and casual.

提案: Give a direct answer and add a short explanation or example to be more informative. Keep language natural and concise.

例: I like wearing blue because it feels calm and suits my skin tone. For instance, I often choose a navy shirt for both work and casual occasions.

× I like to wear comfortable and cage with clothes because, uh, it's easy to me to move around.

✓ I like to wear comfortable and casual clothes because it's easy for me to move around.

The student used 'cage with' which seems to be a phonetic/mistranscription and 'casual' is the intended adjective. Also 'it's easy to me' is incorrect preposition use; the correct phrase is 'easy for me.' The verb form 'to wear' is fine here; no -ing form is required. Suggestion: replace 'cage with' with 'casual' and use the preposition 'for' after 'easy.'

× Yes, I like to wearing T-shirt because it's comfortable to me.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they're comfortable for me.

When using 'like' followed by an activity, the -ing form (gerund) is required: 'like wearing.' Also 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally. 'It's comfortable to me' uses the wrong structure and pronoun number; use 'they're comfortable for me.' Suggestion: use 'like wearing' + plural noun and 'comfortable for me.'

× Yes, umm, I spend a lot of time to shooting my clothes because I have no idea what to wear.

✓ Yes, umm, I spend a lot of time choosing my clothes because I have no idea what to wear.

The verb phrase 'spend time' should be followed by a gerund (choosing), not an infinitive ('to shooting' is doubly wrong). 'Shooting' is the wrong verb here; the correct verb for selecting clothes is 'choosing.' Suggestion: use 'spend a lot of time choosing my clothes.'

× I wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekend depends on my mood.

✓ I wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends depending on my mood.

The sentence has a structure problem: 'weekday and weekend depends' mixes singular/plural and places 'depends' incorrectly. Use plural 'weekends' to match 'weekdays' and join with 'depending on my mood' as a participial phrase. Suggestion: use 'weekdays and weekends depending on my mood.'

× I like to wear blue in color.

✓ I like to wear blue.

The phrase 'blue in color' is redundant in English; simply 'wear blue' is natural. Also 'like to wear' is acceptable, but the prepositional phrase 'in color' is unnecessary. Suggestion: say 'I like to wear blue' or 'I like wearing blue.'