Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clear and use correct vocabulary and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct mistakes (e.g. "casual clothes", "jeans"), and avoid repetition. Add one specific detail (material, favourite outfit) using a linking word to connect ideas.

例: I usually wear casual clothes, especially jeans and T-shirts, because they are comfortable. For example, I often choose a cotton T-shirt and slim jeans when I go out with friends, as this outfit feels relaxed and easy to move in.

提案: Give a direct topic sentence stating your preference, use correct grammar, and explain with specific circumstances. Use linking words (e.g. "however", "when") and correct vocabulary ("smart clothes", "interviews").

例: It depends on the occasion: generally I prefer casual clothes for everyday life; however, I wear smart clothes for interviews or formal meetings. For instance, if I have a job interview, I choose a shirt and trousers to look professional.

提案: Answer directly and correct awkward phrases. Provide one specific supporting detail and use a linking word. Replace incorrect words ("afraid") with correct ones ("ideal" or "perfect").

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to pair with jeans or shorts. I own many T-shirts in different colours, which are perfect for hot summer days.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence and correct wrong words ("choosing girls" → "choosing clothes"). Explain briefly why and use a linking word (e.g. "so"). Be concise and natural.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes. I usually pick something comfortable and simple each morning, so I can get ready quickly and avoid stress.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to contrast (e.g. "On weekdays... whereas"). Use correct forms and avoid repetition. Give one specific example of a work outfit and a weekend outfit.

例: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I usually wear formal work clothes such as a shirt and trousers, whereas on weekends I prefer casual outfits like a soft T-shirt and jeans to relax.

提案: Give a direct statement of preference, correct word errors ("Rue" → "Blue"), and explain why with a specific reason. Use a linking word (e.g. "because") and a natural phrase for appearance ("looks good on me").

例: Blue is my favourite colour, so I often choose blue clothes because the colour feels calming and looks good on me.

× I usually wear casual cold like jams and the T-shirt.

✓ I usually wear casual clothes like jeans and T-shirts.

The student used incorrect words and forms: 'cold' should be 'clothes', 'jams' should be 'jeans', and 'the T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' to match general statement. Use the plural for general categories and correct noun spelling. Suggestion: Learn common clothing vocabulary and use plural nouns when talking about items in general (e.g. 'I wear jeans and T-shirts').

× I think they are comfortable and easy to wear everyday.

✓ I think they are comfortable and easy to wear every day.

'Every day' is an adverbial phrase meaning 'each day' and should be two words. 'Everyday' as one word is an adjective meaning 'ordinary'. Here we need the adverbial phrase to modify the verb 'wear'. Suggestion: Use 'every day' for frequency and 'everyday' as an adjective ('everyday clothes').

× It's simple and good for hang out with friends or just going out.

✓ They are simple and good for hanging out with friends or just going out.

Subject and verb agreement: 'It' is wrong for plural 'clothes' so use 'They'. Also verb pattern requires gerund 'hanging out' after 'for'. Suggestion: Match pronouns to plural nouns and use 'for' + gerund when describing purpose ('good for doing something').

× It's really depends on the situation.

✓ It really depends on the situation.

Extra auxiliary 'is' is unnecessary with 'depends'. The correct structure is 'It depends on ...'. Suggestion: Use 'it depends' rather than 'it's depends'.

× If I'm just at home or with friends and wear casual crowd.

✓ If I'm just at home or with friends I wear casual clothes.

The phrase 'wear casual crowd' is incorrect: 'crowd' is wrong word and 'and' misconnects clauses. Correct structure: conditional clause followed by main clause. Use 'clothes' for garments. Suggestion: Keep conditional clause complete and use correct nouns ('clothes').

× But if I have interview or meeting I choose Mars close.

✓ But if I have an interview or a meeting I choose more formal clothes.

Multiple errors: missing articles 'an' before 'interview' and 'a' before 'meeting'; 'Mars close' is unintelligible and should be 'more formal clothes' to contrast with casual. 'Choose' is acceptable but context needs noun phrase. Suggestion: Use articles for singular countable nouns and choose correct descriptive phrase ('more formal clothes').

× Sometime I my mood of the weather also change what I wear.

✓ Sometimes my mood or the weather also changes what I wear.

Word order and forms wrong: 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes'; 'I my mood of the weather' is ungrammatical — use 'my mood or the weather'; subject-verb agreement: 'changes' needed for singular subject (my mood or the weather counts as singular concept). Suggestion: Use 'sometimes' for frequency, connect alternatives with 'or', and ensure verb agrees with the subject.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to match with jeans or shorts.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to match with jeans or shorts.

No grammatical correction needed; sentence is correct. (Included for completeness.)

× I have many T-shirts in different colours and they are afraid for summer.

✓ I have many T-shirts in different colours and they are ideal for summer.

The adjective 'afraid' is incorrect when describing suitability; 'ideal' or 'good' is appropriate. 'For summer' is fine. Suggestion: Use adjectives that describe suitability (ideal, perfect, good) rather than emotional adjectives like 'afraid'.

× No, I don't spend much time choosing girls and just pick something comfortable and simple and I usually wear the same style everyday.

✓ No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes and just pick something comfortable and simple, and I usually wear the same style every day.

'Choosing girls' is wrong word choice; should be 'choosing clothes'. Also 'everyday' should be 'every day' as two words for frequency. Add commas to separate ideas. Suggestion: Use correct noun 'clothes' and 'every day' for frequency.

× I make things easy for me in the morning.

✓ I make things easy for myself in the morning.

Use correct reflexive pronoun 'myself' after a verb affecting the subject. 'For me' is not wrong but 'for myself' is more natural here. Suggestion: Use reflexive pronouns when the subject and object are the same ('I make things easy for myself').

× Yes, I do wear different style.

✓ Yes, I do wear different styles.

Count noun 'style' should be plural 'styles' when speaking generally. Alternatively 'a different style' if singular. Suggestion: Use plural to indicate variety ('different styles').

× On weekday I have to wear formal clothes, clothes for work like shirts or trousers.

✓ On weekdays I have to wear formal clothes for work, like shirts or trousers.

Use plural 'weekdays' for general routine. 'Clothes for work' is fine but word order improved. Add comma before examples. Suggestion: Use plural for habitual time expressions ('on weekdays').

× But on week weekend I like to wear casual clothes, softest T-shirts and jeans.

✓ But on weekends I like to wear casual clothes, soft T-shirts, and jeans.

'Week weekend' is incorrect; use 'weekends'. 'Softest' is superlative and unnecessary; use 'soft' to describe the T-shirts. Add commas and Oxford comma optional. Suggestion: Use correct time phrase 'on weekends' and appropriate adjective forms.

× But I want to relax.

✓ I want to relax.

Using 'But' at sentence start is unnecessary after previous contrast; the sentence 'I want to relax' is fine alone. Removed 'But' to improve cohesion. Suggestion: Avoid unnecessary conjunctions starting short statements unless linking clearly.

× Rue is my favorite colour so I often choose blue clothes.

✓ Blue is my favorite colour, so I often choose blue clothes.

'Rue' appears to be a misspelling of 'blue'. Place the color word in correct position and add comma before 'so'. Suggestion: Check spelling and sentence word order when stating preferences.

× I think blue is relaxing and looking put on me.

✓ I think blue is relaxing and looks good on me.

'Looking put on me' is incorrect phrasing. Use 'looks good on me' to indicate how clothes/color suit someone. Use simple present 'looks' to agree with subject 'blue'. Suggestion: Use idiomatic phrase 'looks good on me' and ensure subject-verb agreement.