Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct topic sentence stating the kinds of clothes you prefer, then add one or two brief supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

例: I prefer wearing casual and comfortable clothes, such as jeans and soft sweaters. For example, I usually choose breathable fabrics because they are easy to move in and suitable for long days. Also, I like simple, neutral colours that are easy to match.

提案: Again the student repeated the question and mispronounced a word ('computable'). Instead, answer directly: state your preference, give a reason, and optionally contrast with the other option using a linking word.

例: I prefer comfortable and casual clothes rather than smart outfits. Because I work in a relaxed environment, casual clothes let me feel more productive and comfortable. However, I sometimes dress smart for formal meetings.

提案: The student repeated the question and showed hesitation. Respond directly: say whether you like them, give a reason and an example of when you wear them, using a linking word to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are simple and versatile. For instance, I wear T-shirts for exercise and when I relax at home, but I avoid them for formal events.

提案: The student repeated the question instead of answering. Provide a clear topic sentence (yes or no), then justify with one or two specific reasons and an example, using linking words for coherence.

例: No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I usually plan outfits the night before. For example, I select one go-to outfit for work during the week to save time each morning.

提案: The student repeated the question. Answer directly and include specific details about how styles differ, using linking words to link reasons or examples.

例: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I dress more formally for work, while on weekends I prefer casual clothes like jeans and hoodies. This helps me feel professional during workdays and relaxed on my days off.

提案: The student repeated the examiner's question. State the colours you prefer as a topic sentence, then explain why and give a short example, using linking words to make it coherent.

例: I usually prefer neutral colours such as black, grey, and navy because they are easy to match. For example, a navy sweater and black trousers are simple but look smart for many occasions.

× Do you prefer to wear computable and casual clothes or smart clothes?

✓ Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?

The student wrote 'computable' which is an incorrect word choice. The intended adjective is 'comfortable'. This is a vocabulary error rather than grammar category from the list; it affects meaning. Suggestion: replace 'computable' with 'comfortable' and read the question aloud to check that the chosen adjective fits the context.

× Do you like wearing T-shirt T-shirt?

✓ Do you like wearing T-shirts?

The student repeated 'T-shirt' and used singular form while asking about a habit. For general habits or types of clothing, use plural 'T-shirts' or the gerund phrase 'wearing T-shirts'. Also remove the duplicate word. Suggestion: use 'T-shirts' for general statements about garments and avoid accidental repetition.

× Do you wear different style of clothes on weekdays and weekends?

✓ Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?

When referring to more than one kind or type, use the plural 'styles'. The noun 'style' should agree in number with 'different' and 'clothes' (plural). Suggestion: use 'different styles' to indicate multiple kinds of clothing.