Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct topic sentence but expand with a brief, specific reason and example. Use one or two linking words to connect ideas. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

例: I prefer comfortable clothes because they let me move freely and feel relaxed. For example, I often wear soft knit tops and stretch trousers at home or when I travel, since they reduce fatigue and are easy to wash.

提案: Start with a clear preference, then add a specific reason and a short example using a linking word. Avoid single-word answers.

例: I prefer casual clothes because they suit my daily activities and are more practical. For instance, I usually choose jeans and a cardigan for weekends, whereas I only wear smart clothes for formal events.

提案: Correct small errors and finish your thought. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give a contrast using a linking word and a concise example. Avoid trailing words and keep it to two or three sentences.

例: I don't often wear T-shirts because I prefer smarter, more formal tops when I go out. However, I do wear T-shirts at home since they are comfortable and easy to relax in.

提案: Respond with a complete sentence and explain why with a specific detail. Use a linking word to show cause or contrast. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

例: Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I want to look professional and appropriate for different occasions. For example, I plan my work outfits the night before to ensure they match and are wrinkle-free.

提案: Fix grammar and word choice, give a clear contrast with linking words, and include a specific example of weekday and weekend outfits. Keep it concise and coherent.

例: Yes, I wear smarter clothes during the week because I need to look professional for work. On weekends, however, I prefer casual outfits like jeans and T-shirts since they are more comfortable for relaxing or meeting friends.

提案: Clarify phrasing and correct vocabulary (e.g., 'calming' instead of 'coming'). Start with a clear statement of preference, then explain why with specific contexts and a linking word.

例: I like both pink and blue. Pink feels cheerful and I often choose it for special occasions, whereas blue is calming and is my favorite for everyday wear when I want to feel relaxed.

× I want comfortable clothes.

✓ I want to wear comfortable clothes.

The original sentence omits the verb phrase needed after 'want' when expressing a desire to perform an action. 'Want' followed by an activity requires 'to' + base verb (infinitive). Use 'want to wear' to clearly express the desire to wear comfortable clothes.

× Actually, I want casual clothes.

✓ Actually, I prefer casual clothes.

Using 'want' with a noun is not wrong, but in this context 'prefer' better matches the question asking for preference. 'Prefer' expresses choice and is more natural. If keeping 'want', 'I want to wear casual clothes' would also be correct.

× No, I don't usually wear T-shirts because I prefer smarter, more formal tabs when I go out.

✓ No, I don't usually wear T-shirts because I prefer smarter, more formal tops when I go out.

The word 'tabs' is a typo or incorrect word; 'tops' is the correct noun for upper-body garments. No verb agreement issue here, but the vocabulary error changes meaning. Replace with 'tops' to make the sentence grammatical and meaningful.

× However, I do wear them occasionally at home since they're comfortable and easy to relax. And.

✓ However, I do wear them occasionally at home since they're comfortable and make it easy to relax.

The original has incorrect clause structure ('easy to relax' needs an agent or subject and 'make' to link it) and an incomplete fragment 'And.' Combine ideas into a single complete sentence. Use 'make it easy to relax' to correctly express causation.

× Yes, actually a lot of time.

✓ Yes, actually I spend a lot of time choosing clothes.

The original is a fragment lacking a verb and subject. Provide the missing verb phrase to form a complete sentence and directly answer the question about spending time choosing clothes.

× Yes actually where to wear smarter clothes during the week because I need to look professional for work.

✓ Yes, actually I wear smarter clothes during the week because I need to look professional for work.

The original contains 'where to wear' which is incorrect and likely a mispronunciation or typo. Replace with 'I wear' to supply the correct subject-verb structure and convey the intended meaning.

× But on weekends I prefer casual playing back outfits like jeans and T-shirts since they're more comfortable for relaxing or going out with friends.

✓ But on weekends I prefer casual outfits like jeans and T-shirts since they're more comfortable for relaxing or going out with friends.

'Casual playing back outfits' is ungrammatical and unclear. Remove incorrect words and use 'casual outfits' to convey the intended meaning. Ensure parallel structure 'jeans and T-shirts' is fine.

× I like bold and both pink and blue.

✓ I like bold colours, especially pink and blue.

Original phrasing is ungrammatical: 'bold and both pink and blue' mixes structures. Use 'bold colours' and 'especially' to indicate preference for pink and blue. Also correct spelling 'colour(s)' as appropriate.

× Pink feels cheerful and quite feminine so I often choose it for special occasions, whereas blue is coming and has always been my favorite.

✓ Pink feels cheerful and quite feminine, so I often choose it for special occasions, whereas blue is calming and has always been my favorite.

'Blue is coming' is incorrect; the intended adjective is 'calming'. Also add a comma before 'so' for clarity. Fixing the adjective corrects meaning and grammatical form.