Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clear and concise: start with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give 1–2 specific reasons and a brief example. Avoid repetition and incomplete phrases. Use linking words (because, so, for example) to make the response coherent.

例: I prefer casual clothes because they make me feel comfortable and relaxed. For example, I often wear a plain T-shirt and jeans when I go out with friends because they are easy to move in and suit informal activities.

提案: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then give a reason and a short example. Avoid vague phrasing like "to look like more impressive" — explain what you mean (e.g., more confident or natural).

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me feel relaxed and confident. For example, I choose sneakers and a neat hoodie when meeting friends, as this combination looks tidy but still comfortable.

提案: Keep it natural: start with a direct yes/no, give specific reasons, and avoid repeating words. Include one concrete detail (material, fit, or an activity) to support your point.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are lightweight and let me move freely. For example, I wear cotton T-shirts when I cycle or hang out with friends because they are breathable and comfortable.

提案: Good structure: you answered directly and gave reasons. Improve by correcting grammar (e.g., "where I went" → "I'm going to") and using linking words (because, so). Add one specific example of how long or what you check (color, formality).

例: Yes, I often spend time choosing clothes because I want to match the event. For example, if I’m going to a graduation I pick a smart shirt and trousers, but for a casual meetup I choose jeans and a T-shirt so I feel comfortable.

提案: Be precise and avoid incorrect words ("delicious" is wrong). Start with a clear topic sentence, then contrast weekdays and weekends with specific examples and a linking word (whereas, but, so).

例: Yes, I wear different styles. On weekdays I wear a school uniform, whereas at the weekend I usually wear casual clothes like jeans and a hoodie so I can relax or meet friends.

提案: Give a clear direct answer about your preferred colours, then explain why with one specific reason and a short example. Avoid vague phrases like "static vibes" and informal fillers like "you know". Use correct grammar for contrast (e.g., "I prefer light tops and dark bottoms because...").

例: I prefer light-coloured tops and darker bottoms because the contrast looks neat and balanced. For example, I often wear a pale blue shirt with dark navy jeans because it feels calm but still stylish.

× I prefer wearing casual clothes to look like more impressive and to look like more comfortable and relaxed when you see when wearing it.

✓ I prefer wearing casual clothes to look more impressive and more comfortable and relaxed when people see me wearing them.

Incorrect use of 'to look like' and awkward phrasing. Use 'to look' + adjective rather than 'to look like more impressive'. Also pronouns and plural agreement: 'people see me wearing them' clarifies subject and matches plural 'clothes'. Suggestion: Use 'to look' + adjective and ensure pronoun references and number agreement.

× For example, I choose some, I choose I I wear it when I when.

✓ For example, I choose certain clothes to wear for different occasions.

The original is fragmented and repetitive with missing words and unclear meaning. Reconstruct the sentence to express choosing clothes for occasions. Keep subject-verb-object structure and remove repetitions.

× I prefer wearing casual clothes to look like more impressive and when I wear it I feel comfortable and relaxed.

✓ I prefer wearing casual clothes to look more impressive, and when I wear them I feel comfortable and relaxed.

Replace 'to look like more impressive' with 'to look more impressive'. Also ensure pronoun and number agreement: 'clothes' -> 'them'. Add comma before coordinating conjunction for clarity.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because wearing T-shirts feels more comfortable, relaxed and it easy to move.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they feel more comfortable and relaxed, and they make it easy to move.

Avoid repeating 'wearing T-shirts' and use 'they' to refer to T-shirts. Add missing verb 'make' in 'make it easy to move'. Ensure parallel structure 'comfortable and relaxed'. Suggestion: Use pronouns to avoid repetition and include necessary verbs.

× And for me that is the best example of casual fit to be more casual person.

✓ For me, that is the best example of a casual outfit that makes me look more casual.

Incorrect noun choice 'fit' and missing article. Use 'outfit' and include 'a'. Clarify purpose with 'that makes me look more casual'. Suggestion: Use correct noun and include article where needed.

× Yes, I want to find clothes that suit the event where I went by and I don't want to feel out of place just because of what I'm wearing.

✓ Yes, I want to find clothes that suit the event I am going to, and I don't want to feel out of place because of what I'm wearing.

Use correct expression 'the event I am going to' rather than 'where I went by'. Maintain tense consistency with present/future context. Remove unnecessary 'just'. Suggestion: Use 'going to' for future events and simpler causation 'because of'.

× And if my clothes is suited on the event I feel more comfortable.

✓ And if my clothes suit the event, I feel more comfortable.

Subject-verb agreement: 'clothes' is plural so use 'suit' not 'is suited'. Also use 'suit the event' rather than 'suited on'. Suggestion: Match verb form to plural subject and prefer active voice.

× After my school I wear delicious to feel more comfortable and on weekdays it depends if I'm going out or hanging with my friends so I wear casual clothes or something like I can wear on that day.

✓ After school I wear something more comfortable, and on weekends it depends: if I'm going out or hanging out with my friends, I wear casual clothes or something appropriate for the day.

'Delicious' is incorrect adjective for clothing. Use 'something more comfortable'. 'On weekdays' conflicted with context; likely 'on weekends'. 'Hanging' needs 'hanging out'. Improve sentence flow and clarity. Suggestion: Choose correct adjectives and common phrases like 'hanging out' and 'something appropriate'.

× What colour clothes do you like? Student: I use light color on the top when my top is light is supposed to be in the down is dark and so that it can be more static vibes you know?

✓ I prefer light colors on top and darker colors on the bottom so the outfit gives a more balanced or calmer vibe.

Original has multiple preposition and structure errors: 'on the top' -> 'on top', awkward clause 'is supposed to be in the down is dark'. Rephrase to 'light colors on top and darker colors on the bottom' and use 'vibe' singular. 'Static vibes' unclear; 'balanced or calmer vibe' is clearer. Suggestion: Use standard collocations 'on top'/'on the bottom' and simpler nouns like 'vibe'.