Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct, be concise, and use linking words to add a specific example. Correct verb forms and remove redundancy.

例: I prefer wearing baggy or oversized clothes because they’re more comfortable and suit my relaxed personality. For example, I often choose loose jeans and a hoodie when I go out with friends because they let me move freely and feel relaxed.

提案: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and filler words, and explain briefly why. Use one linking phrase to contrast options.

例: I prefer baggy clothes rather than smart or fitted casual clothes because fitted clothes often feel tight. For example, slim jeans restrict my movement, so I choose looser styles for comfort.

提案: Give a clear, grammatical response and one specific reason. Avoid unclear phrases and pronoun errors. Use a linking phrase to add reason.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they’re comfortable and easy to style. For instance, a simple graphic tee expresses my personality and pairs well with jeans or shorts.

提案: Start with a direct answer, correct tense and word order, and give a specific reason with a linking word. Remove hesitations and fillers.

例: Yes, I often spend a long time choosing clothes because I get confused by so many options. For example, I usually try on several items and compare styles and prices before deciding.

提案: Clarify the distinction between weekday and weekend styles, correct grammar, and use linking words to explain reasons. Keep it concise and specific.

例: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear smart-casual clothes for work, such as chinos and a shirt. However, on weekends I prefer baggy clothes like loose jeans and hoodies because they’re more comfortable at home.

提案: Provide a direct answer, improve grammar, and give a brief reason or example to make it specific. Use a linking word to connect reason.

例: I usually wear black because it suits my style and is easy to match. For example, I often choose a black hoodie and jeans because they look neat and simple.

× I prefer to wear baggy clothes or oversize clothes because they feel me more comfortable and match my relaxed personality.

✓ I prefer to wear baggy or oversized clothes because they make me more comfortable and match my relaxed personality.

The verb 'feel' is incorrectly used with the object 'me'; English uses 'make someone + adjective' to express causing a feeling. Also 'oversize' should be 'oversized' as an adjective. Suggest using 'make me comfortable' or 'feel more comfortable to me' and use correct adjective forms.

× For example, I have often choose loose jeans and hoodies when I am out with my friends.

✓ For example, I often choose loose jeans and hoodies when I am out with my friends.

The present perfect 'have often choose' is incorrect because 'choose' should be past participle 'chosen' if using 'have'; however the simple present 'I often choose' fits habitual action. Use 'I often choose' for habits or 'I have often chosen' if emphasizing experience.

× Uh, no, I prefer to wear baggy clothes, not casual clothes because in casual clothes I feel tight as compared to casual as compared to baggy clothes.

✓ No, I prefer to wear baggy clothes rather than casual clothes because I feel tighter in casual clothes than in baggy ones.

Redundant phrases 'as compared to' and repetition cause confusion. Use comparative structure 'feel tighter in X than in Y'. 'Baggy ones' replaces repeated 'baggy clothes'. Ensure concise comparative phrasing.

× Of course I like to wear T-shirts goes in AT shirts we feel freely on.

✓ Of course I like to wear T-shirts because they are comfortable to wear.

Original sentence mixes words and incorrect pronoun/reference. 'T-shirts goes in AT shirts we feel freely on' is ungrammatical. Use 'they' to refer to T-shirts and 'comfortable to wear' for clarity.

× Your T-shirts will look cool or it suits my personality as well.

✓ T-shirts look cool and they suit my personality as well.

Subject-pronoun agreement error: 'it' does not match plural 'T-shirts'. Use plural pronoun 'they'. Also avoid 'will' which changes meaning; simple present 'look' fits general preference.

× If I'm not wrong, I spent more time in choosing clothes because uh, I got I get confused when I go for shopping of clothes.

✓ If I'm not wrong, I spend more time choosing clothes because I get confused when I go shopping for clothes.

Mixed tenses: 'spent' (past) conflicts with habitual meaning; use present 'spend'. Remove extra words 'in' and 'of'. Use 'go shopping for clothes' pattern. Eliminate repeated 'I got I get'.

× In a clothes we get many options so that's why I I confuse when I choosing the clothes.

✓ There are many options for clothes, so I get confused when I choose what to buy.

Unclear structure and incorrect articles ('a clothes'). Use 'There are many options for clothes' and adjust verb forms: 'get confused' (present) and 'when I choose' (simple present for habit). Remove repeated words.

× Of course on weekdays I prefer casual clothes.

✓ On weekdays, I prefer casual clothes.

Minor redundancy 'Of course' unnecessary; sentence otherwise correct. Removed 'Of course' for conciseness. Added comma after introductory phrase for clarity.

× Uh, on my work day or on the weekends I prefer baggy type clothes because on my home I feel freely or comfortable so that's why I love weekends.

✓ On workdays and at the weekends, I prefer baggy clothes because I feel free and comfortable at home, which is why I love weekends.

Problems: 'work day' should be 'workdays'; 'on my home' is incorrect preposition—use 'at home'; 'feel freely' should be 'feel free'; 'baggy type clothes' simplified to 'baggy clothes'. Reorder clauses for clarity.

× I usually I wear black clothes 'cause it suits my personality or I like black clothes very much.

✓ I usually wear black clothes because they suit my personality and I like black clothes very much.

Remove duplicate 'I'. 'It suits' is incorrect for plural 'clothes'—use 'they suit'. Use 'because' instead of colloquial ''cause' for formal clarity. Maintain consistent present tense.