Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, pronouns), avoid redundancy, and add one specific detail. Keep to under five sentences and use a linking word if expanding.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they make me feel relaxed. For example, I often choose soft cotton T-shirts and loose trousers for everyday wear because they are breathable and easy to move in.

提案: Respond directly with a topic sentence, avoid filler words, and give a specific reason with a linking word. Use correct noun forms and limit to a few concise sentences.

例: I definitely prefer casual clothes to smart clothes because they are more comfortable. For instance, I usually wear T-shirts and jeans when I study or hang out with friends since they let me move freely.

提案: Correct vocabulary and sentence structure, avoid unclear words ("Teachers" seems wrong) and combine ideas into one coherent sentence. Add a short specific example and a linking word.

例: Yes, I enjoy wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and versatile. For example, I often pair a T-shirt with shorts or jeans when I go to the park or meet friends.

提案: Start with a direct topic sentence, correct articles and phrasing, and explain briefly how you save time using a clear linking word. Be specific about what your "template" means.

例: No, I usually don’t spend much time choosing clothes because I have a simple routine. For example, I keep a few ready-made outfits—basic T-shirt, jeans, and a jacket—so I can dress quickly in the morning.

提案: Use a clear comparison structure, correct word choice ("official" → "formal", "corsets" is incorrect), and include a linking word. Give one concise specific example for each time period.

例: Yes, I dress more formally on weekdays because I go to work or classes; for example, I wear shirts and trousers. On weekends I dress casually and comfortably, such as wearing a T-shirt and jeans when I relax or meet friends.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence, correct singular/plural and article use, and add a brief reason and one example. Use a linking word if adding detail.

例: I prefer black and white because they are simple and versatile. For example, I often choose a white shirt for meetings and a black jacket for evenings since both match many outfits.

× I like to wear clothes like comfortable or casual that's makes me feel good.

✓ I like to wear clothes that are comfortable or casual and make me feel good.

The original sentence uses 'comfortable or casual' directly after 'clothes' without linking verb or relative clause, and 'that's makes' is ungrammatical (mixing contraction 'that's' and verb 'makes'). Use the relative clause 'that are' to modify 'clothes' and use the plural verb form 'make' to agree with 'clothes'. Suggestion: use 'that are comfortable or casual and make me feel good.'

× Yeah, that's definitely. I really like the casual clothes, like T-shirt or something. I think, uh, it's really comfortable.

✓ Yeah, definitely. I really like casual clothes, like T-shirts or something. I think they're really comfortable.

Multiple issues: 'that's definitely' is awkward; use 'yeah, definitely'. 'Casual clothes' does not need 'the'. 'T-shirt' should be plural when talking generally: 'T-shirts'. 'It's really comfortable' incorrectly uses singular pronoun for plural 'clothes' — use 'they're'. Suggestion: remove unnecessary articles and match pronouns and nouns in number.

× I do like wearing T-shirts. Teachers are comfortable and you can. Wear most shorts with T-shirts.

✓ I do like wearing T-shirts. They are comfortable and you can wear most shorts with T-shirts.

The sentence 'Teachers are comfortable' likely intended 'They are comfortable'; 'Teachers' is incorrect noun. There is also an accidental period splitting the clause. Use the pronoun 'they' to refer to T-shirts and keep the verb with the clause 'you can wear'. Suggestion: ensure pronouns correctly refer to the noun and avoid unintended sentence breaks.

× Usually I don't spend the lots of time on choosing the clothes, I always make some template so I can use it directly.

✓ Usually I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes; I always make a template so I can use it directly.

'the lots of time' is incorrect — use 'a lot of time' (no 'the'). 'Choosing the clothes' is unnatural; general idea uses 'choosing clothes' without 'the'. 'Some template' should be 'a template'. Also combine clauses properly (semicolon or two sentences). Suggestion: use 'a lot of time', drop unnecessary articles with plural general nouns, and use 'a template'.

× Uh yes, I usually wear more official on weekdays and in weekends I usually wear some corsets a casual or comfortable.

✓ Uh yes, I usually dress more formally on weekdays, and on weekends I usually wear casual or comfortable clothes.

'Wear more official' is incorrect word choice and form — use 'dress more formally'. 'In weekends' should be 'on weekends'. 'Some corsets a casual or comfortable' is garbled; likely meant 'casual or comfortable clothes'. Suggestion: use adverb 'formally' to modify dress, use 'on weekends', and place 'casual or comfortable' before 'clothes'.

× I prefer black or white. Uh, I think it's simple color that you can wear it in every situation.

✓ I prefer black or white. Uh, I think they are simple colors that you can wear in any situation.

'It's simple color' incorrectly uses singular pronoun and noun when referring to two colors — use plural 'they are simple colors'. Also 'that you can wear it in every situation' contains redundant pronoun 'it' after 'that' — remove 'it' and use 'in any situation' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: match number between subject and pronoun and avoid redundant pronouns.