Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid hesitations and fragmented phrases. Use linking words to make the sentence coherent (e.g., “because” or “for example”). Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use precise vocabulary (e.g., “urban/casual”, “comfortable skirts”, “blouses”).

例: I prefer urban casual clothes because they are stylish yet comfortable. For example, I often wear simple skirts or blouses that are easy to move in and match well with sneakers or flats. This style suits my daily routine and social life.

提案: State your preference clearly in the first sentence, then give specific reasons and an example. Reduce repetition and correct common mistakes (e.g., “prefer casual clothes”, “because they are comfortable”). Use linking words such as “because”, “for example” or “so”.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they are practical for everyday activities. For example, I often wear jeans and a soft sweater when I go shopping or meet friends, since they allow me to move freely and feel relaxed.

提案: Answer directly and expand briefly with specific reasons or an example. Remove filler words (umm) and correct grammar (e.g., “I like wearing T-shirts” or “I like to wear T-shirts”). Keep it concise and natural.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are affordable and comfortable. For example, I often wear plain or striped T-shirts at home and for casual outings because they go well with jeans or shorts.

提案: Make a clear statement whether you spend much time or not, then explain specific reasons using clear vocabulary (e.g., “fabric”, “pattern”, “fit”). Avoid unclear words and unfinished sentences. Use linking words like “because” and give a short example of what you consider when choosing clothes.

例: Yes, I usually spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I care about the fabric and design. For instance, I check whether the cotton is soft, whether the pattern is attractive, and if the fit will be comfortable before I buy something.

提案: Provide a direct answer first (yes or no), then give a clear reason and a short example. Remove hesitations and correct structure (e.g., “I wear the same style on weekdays and weekends because…”). Use linking words such as “so”, “because”, or “for example”.

例: No, I usually wear the same style on weekdays and weekends because I prefer simple outfits that are easy to put on. For example, I often wear casual dresses or jeans and a top whether I’m working or going out with friends, since they save time and are versatile.

提案: Answer with a clear colour choice first, then explain specifically why you prefer it (e.g., “because it suits my skin tone” or “because it’s versatile”). Avoid unclear words and comparisons. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., “black suits my skin tone and makes me look brighter”).

例: I prefer black because it suits my skin tone and makes my complexion look brighter. Also, black is versatile and easy to match with different accessories, so I feel more confident wearing it.

× 'I only prefer to wear.'

✓ 'I prefer certain kinds of clothes.'

'I only prefer to wear.' is incomplete and ungrammatical; 'prefer' requires an object (what you prefer). Suggest using 'I prefer certain kinds of clothes' or 'I only prefer to wear casual clothes.' This adds a noun phrase as the object and completes the sentence.'

× 'I usually like city fashion but maybe it was like easy to wear skirt or shirt like that.'

✓ 'I usually like city fashion, but I prefer clothes that are easy to wear, like skirts or shirts.'

'...maybe it was like easy to wear skirt or shirt like that' is ungrammatical and unclear. Fix by providing a clear subject and verb and parallel noun forms: 'skirts or shirts'. Use 'prefer' to express choice and 'that are easy to wear' as a relative clause.'

× 'I prefer to casual calls because it's easy to wear and you can wait every day for example like go easy on.'

✓ 'I prefer casual clothes because they're easy to wear and you can wear them every day, for example when you go shopping or to meetings.'

'casual calls' is a pluralization/spelling error (should be 'casual clothes'). 'It's' should be 'they're' to agree with plural 'clothes'. 'wait' is incorrect verb; should be 'wear'. The original sentence also has unclear fragments; restructure for clarity and correct plural agreement.'

× 'I like to wearing T-shirt because it's easy to buy and to, umm, wear in everyday life.'

✓ 'I like wearing T-shirts because they're easy to buy and wear in everyday life.'

'like to wearing' mixes 'like to' + verb and 'verb+ing'; use either 'like to wear' or 'like wearing'. Also 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' to match general statement. Use plural agreement with 'they're' and remove unnecessary 'to' before 'wear'.'

× 'I spend a lot of time choosing a curse because I like the juicy like the drawing, the tie up cotton. Then I gonna choose to buy it. I think it's important because.'

✓ 'I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I like details like patterns and tied cotton. Then I decide to buy them. I think it's important.'

'a curse' is incorrect; should be 'clothes' (plural). The sentence contains many unclear fragments ('juicy like the drawing')—interpret as 'details like patterns'. 'gonna' is informal and should be 'decide' or 'am going to'. Ensure plural agreement with 'them'. Also avoid sentence fragments; finish ideas.'

× 'I actually, MMM bearing the same style of course when they're I go to work and when I go outside on weekends because it's easy to put it on and don't have to think too much, but go to somewhere.'

✓ 'I actually wear the same style when I go to work and when I go out on weekends because it's easy to put on and I do not have to think too much about what to wear.'

'bearing the same style of course when they're I go' is ungrammatical and confused. Replace with 'wear the same style'. Use 'go out' not 'go outside'. 'put it on' should be 'put on' with no object or 'put them on' if referring to clothes. Add subject 'I' before 'do not have' and complete the phrase 'about what to wear'.'

× 'Back because it's sued my skin and that make my skin very bright and prettiest then another tooth.'

✓ 'Black, because it suits my skin and makes my complexion look brighter and prettier than other colours.'

'Back' is a misspelling of 'black'. 'sued my skin' should be 'suits my skin' (verb agreement and spelling). 'that make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular 'it'. 'prettiest then another tooth' is nonsensical; interpret as 'prettier than other colours'. Correct adjective form and comparative structure.'