Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your answer clear and concise: start with a topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific supporting details. Fix grammar (use singular/plural correctly) and choose correct words (e.g. "casual clothes", "office wear"). Keep it under five sentences and avoid repetitions.

例: I prefer comfortable clothes. For everyday casual wear I usually choose jeans and T-shirts because they are easy to move in and wash. For work I wear smart office clothes such as a blouse and tailored trousers to look professional.

提案: Begin with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give a reason and a brief example. Avoid repetitions and filler words. Use linking words like "because" and "so" correctly, and correct grammar ("I prefer comfortable clothes").

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me concentrate and feel relaxed during work. For example, I often wear a loose T-shirt and jeans on busy days rather than fashionable outfits that need more care.

提案: Answer directly then add specific details: say why you like T-shirts, describe the style and colours, and use correct grammar and word order. Use linking words like "because" and "for example" to make it coherent. Keep sentences short and avoid hesitations.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are very comfortable. I prefer baggy rather than tight T-shirts, and I usually choose dark colours such as black, dark green or navy.

提案: Give a clear estimate and reason. Avoid vague phrases and irrelevant comments. Start with a direct answer, then explain how much time you spend and why, using precise time expressions and correct vocabulary.

例: Yes, I sometimes spend quite a bit of time choosing clothes because I want to feel comfortable and presentable. Usually I spend about 15 to 30 minutes deciding what to wear for the day.

提案: Answer directly and contrast weekdays vs weekends using a linking word like "while" or "whereas". Mention specific examples of weekday and weekend outfits and correct grammar (e.g. "I wear office clothes on weekdays").

例: Yes. On weekdays I wear office clothes such as a blouse and skirt because I meet clients, whereas on weekends I wear casual, loose clothes like T-shirts and sweatpants to relax.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence stating your colour preference, then give brief reasons and specific examples. Use correct adjectives and word order ("dark-coloured clothes") and avoid awkward phrases. Keep it natural and concise.

例: I prefer dark-coloured clothes because they look smart and are easy to match. For example, I often choose black, dark blue or dark green items like T-shirts and jackets.

× Actually I like to wear a comfortable clothes which means I would like to wear jeans and T-shirt fee when I work.

✓ Actually I like to wear comfortable clothes, which means I would like to wear jeans and T-shirts when I work.

'Clothes' is plural so the modifier 'a' is incorrect (article error and singular/plural mismatch). 'T-shirt' should be plural to match general statement. Also removed unclear word 'fee' and added commas for clarity. Suggestion: remove 'a' before plural nouns and use plural form for items in general statements.

× When I work in I usually wear office fare and I going out or going.

✓ When I work in the office I usually wear office wear, and when I go out I wear casual clothes.

This sentence has missing and incorrect words making structure unclear. 'Work in' needs an object ('the office'); 'fare' is wrong word choice ('wear' or 'attire'); 'I going out or going' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: include necessary nouns and correct verbs, and split into two clauses with proper verbs ('go' and 'wear').

× I prefer where to comfortable clothes because it's very helpful when I'm working and I like I like to I like to be a simple girl.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because they are very practical when I'm working, and I like to be a simple girl.

'Where' is incorrect (should be 'wear'); 'it's' refers to 'clothes' which is plural so use 'they are' or rephrase; repeated 'I like' is redundant. Suggestion: use correct verb 'wear' and match pronoun number to noun; remove repetition.

× So I don't want I've I've fashionable, but I'm don't like, uh.

✓ So I don't want to be fashionable, but I don't really like flashy styles.

Incorrect verb forms ('I've I've fashionable' is wrong), and 'I'm don't like' mixes auxiliary verbs. Suggestion: use correct infinitive 'to be' after 'want' and use 'don't' with base verb; provide clear phrasing like 'I don't want to be fashionable.'

× Yes, I prefer to wear T-shirts because it's, uh, it's feeling me very comfortable and I like to wear T-shirts baggy, not tight T-shirts and I prefer to wear uh dark colour T-shirt like black, uh dark green, uh, like that colours I'm.

✓ Yes, I prefer to wear T-shirts because they make me feel very comfortable. I like to wear baggy, not tight, T-shirts, and I prefer dark-coloured T-shirts like black or dark green.

'It's feeling me very comfortable' is incorrect pronoun and verb usage; use 'they make me feel' for plural 'T-shirts'. 'Dark colour T-shirt' needs plural/agreement and hyphenated 'dark-coloured'. The sentence 'like that colours I'm' is ungrammatical and was removed. Suggestion: match pronouns to nouns, use 'make someone feel' construction, and use consistent plural forms.

× Actually, yes, because I am a girl so I would like to and I prefer to wear feel comfortable and daughter.

✓ Actually, yes. Because I am a girl, I like to wear clothes that make me feel comfortable and pretty.

Sentence has tense and word choice errors: 'would like to and I prefer to wear feel comfortable and daughter' is ungrammatical. 'Daughter' is incorrect word. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual preference ('I like'), and correct vocabulary ('feel comfortable' and 'pretty' or 'feminine').

× So, uh, I spend a time like a third, uh, 13 minutes to 50 minutes like so.

✓ So I spend about 15 to 50 minutes choosing clothes.

Awkward phrasing and unclear numbers. 'Spend a time like a third' is meaningless. Suggestion: use 'spend about' plus a clear time range and gerund 'choosing clothes.'

× Yes, I do, uh, in week days I usually working in my business, so I prefer to and I must do where the office where for my business and weekends I like, I prefer to wear like, uh, seem loozy.

✓ Yes, I do. On weekdays I usually work in my business, so I have to wear office clothes for work, and on weekends I prefer to wear loose, casual clothes.

'I usually working' needs present simple 'I usually work'. 'Must do where the office where' is incorrect; should be 'have to wear office clothes.' 'Seem loozy' is unclear; likely 'loose' or 'lazy' — 'loose' fits clothing. Suggestion: use correct tense for habitual actions and correct vocabulary ('loose, casual clothes').

× Especially I prefer to wear dark colour clothes because it's very attractive when people see me.

✓ I especially prefer to wear dark-coloured clothes because they look attractive when people see me.

Word order and preposition use: 'Especially I prefer to wear' is awkward—'I especially prefer to wear' is natural. 'Dark colour clothes' should be 'dark-coloured clothes'. 'It's' incorrectly refers to plural 'clothes'; use 'they look'. Suggestion: place 'especially' before verb, hyphenate compound adjective, and match verb to plural subject.