Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, with a good topic sentence and specific examples. To improve, reduce minor grammar slips and make sentences slightly more concise. Use one linking phrase to connect the general preference and the examples (e.g., “for instance” or “for special occasions”), and correct article use and word choice (e.g., “for festivals” not “for festival”).

例: I prefer comfortable clothes, but I choose my outfit depending on the situation. For instance, when I travel I usually wear trousers and a relaxed T-shirt; for festivals, I often wear traditional clothing to celebrate.

提案: Good direct response and clear reasons. Improve by correcting small grammatical errors and adding a linking word to make the contrast clearer (e.g., “whereas” or “however”). Avoid repeating words like “comfortable” too often by using synonyms (e.g., “casual” or “relaxed”).

例: I prefer casual, comfortable clothes rather than smart clothes. Although smart clothes can look better for special occasions, they are often impractical and uncomfortable for long periods, whereas casual clothes are more versatile for daily wear.

提案: The answer is relevant but has several grammar and vocabulary errors that affect clarity. Fix comparative structure (“prefer X to Y”), correct word choice (“breathability” instead of “air calculation”), and grammar (use “they” and plural verbs for T-shirts). Keep it concise and use one linking word to list benefits.

例: Yes, I do. I prefer cotton T-shirts to other materials because they offer better breathability. Also, they are easy to wear, low maintenance, and generally more comfortable.

提案: You answer directly and give specific reasons, which is good. Improve by using natural phrasing (avoid “drawbacks” for a habit; say “one of my weaknesses” or “I take my time”), correct tense and article usage, and use linking words to connect reasons (e.g., “because” or “so”). Reduce repetition and keep sentences smooth.

例: Yes, I do. I tend to take my time when shopping because I like to check the fit, fabric, and stitching carefully, so I only buy items I know will last.

× For example, when I'm traveling I prefer trousers and a relaxed T-shirt, while for festival I often wear traditional clothing to celebrate the occasion.

✓ For example, when I'm traveling I prefer trousers and a relaxed T-shirt, while for festivals I often wear traditional clothing to celebrate the occasion.

Use of the preposition/article before 'festival' is incorrect. 'For festival' should be 'for festivals' or 'for a festival'. Here plural 'festivals' sounds natural to indicate occasions in general.

× Smart clothes may look better for special occasion, but they are often less practical and uncomfortable to wear for long periods.

✓ Smart clothes may look better for special occasions, but they are often less practical and uncomfortable to wear for long periods.

The phrase 'for special occasion' is missing an article or pluralization. Use plural 'special occasions' to speak generally, or 'a special occasion' for a single event.

× I prefer cotton T-shirts than other other materials because it gives more air calculation in it.

✓ I prefer cotton T-shirts to other materials because they allow more air circulation.

Incorrect comparative construction 'prefer X than Y' should be 'prefer X to Y'. 'Other other' is a repetition error. 'It gives more air calculation' is incorrect vocabulary; use 'they allow more air circulation' and match plural pronoun 'they' with 'T-shirts'.

× Also it's easy to wear, low maintenance and it's give a comfortable.

✓ Also they are easy to wear, low maintenance, and comfortable.

Pronoun 'it' is wrong for plural 'T-shirts' — use 'they'. Verb 'give' wrong form and extra article 'a' before 'comfortable' is incorrect. Use adjective 'comfortable' without 'a'. Also parallelism requires consistent forms: 'easy to wear, low maintenance, and comfortable.'

× I usually spend hours on shopping.

✓ I usually spend hours shopping.

The phrase 'spend hours on shopping' is unidiomatic. Use 'spend hours shopping' or 'spend hours on shopping' is seldom used; the correct structure is 'spend time + -ing' so 'spend hours shopping.'

× I want to check the fit of that dress before that I am buying.

✓ I want to check the fit of a dress before I buy it.

The clause 'before that I am buying' is ungrammatical. Use the subordinating conjunction 'before' followed by the subject and base verb: 'before I buy it'. Also 'that dress' changed to 'a dress' for general statement; keep 'that' if referring to a specific dress.

× Also, I want to check the material and the stitching.

✓ Also, I want to check the material and stitching.

This sentence is acceptable but slightly wordy with 'the stitching'; removing second 'the' is more natural. Not strictly necessary, but improves fluency.

× I want to know much about it and then only I buy it.

✓ I want to know more about it, and only then do I buy it.

'Know much about it' is unidiomatic in affirmative sentences; use 'know more about it'. Word order 'then only I buy it' is incorrect; correct emphatic order is 'only then do I buy it'.