Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh), and give one or two specific examples or reasons. Use linking words if you add details (for example, because, so). Keep to 2–4 sentences.

例: I usually prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I find them practical for everyday activities. For example, I often wear jeans and loose T-shirts or a denim shirt when I go out, as they are easy to move in and low-maintenance.

提案: Give a clear direct answer first, then explain briefly using linking words. Avoid contradicting yourself; decide which you prefer and support it with a reason. Keep sentences short and logical.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes most of the time because comfort is important for my daily routine. However, I will wear smart clothes for special occasions or work, since they look more professional.

提案: Be specific and correct grammatically. Remove unclear words and filler phrases. State why you like T-shirts and give a simple example or context. Use linking words (for example, because, when).

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and versatile. For example, I wear a T-shirt with jeans when I run errands or meet friends on weekends.

提案: Answer directly and briefly, then give a specific reason or example. Avoid repetition and fillers. Use one linking word to connect reason (for example, because, since) and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

例: Yes, I often spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I want to look appropriate for the occasion. For instance, I usually plan my outfit carefully before going to a meeting or a social event.

× A jeans shirt like.

✓ A jean shirt, I guess.

The student used 'A jeans shirt like.' which is ungrammatical. 'Jeans' is plural or a noun for trousers; the correct adjective form is 'jean' when describing a shirt. Also add a small filler 'I guess' to sound natural. Use article 'a' before a singular count noun: 'a jean shirt.'

× Uh, I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes and then smart clothes without comfortable.

✓ Uh, I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes that are uncomfortable.

The original has unclear structure and missing articles/adjectival order. 'Smart clothes without comfortable' is incorrect. Use 'rather than' to contrast preferences and add 'that are' to describe smart clothes as 'uncomfortable.'

× It's most important that smart.

✓ It's most important that they are comfortable even when they are smart.

'That smart' is missing a subject and verb; also article use is wrong. Clarify meaning by adding 'they are' and complete the clause: 'most important that they are comfortable.'

× So yes, I like T-shirt because daily basis I use I wear dessert and it really compatible.

✓ Yes, I like T-shirts because on a daily basis I wear them and they are really comfortable.

Multiple issues: plural 'T-shirt' should be 'T-shirts' (singular/plural issue) and 'daily basis' requires 'on a daily basis' (preposition). 'I use I wear dessert' is garbled; likely meant 'I wear them' and 'it really compatible' needs verb 'are' and adjective 'comfortable.' Corrections address subject-verb agreement and correct adjective use.

× I like T-shirt because daily basis I use I wear dessert and it really compatible.

✓ Yes, I like T-shirts because on a daily basis I wear them and they are really comfortable.

The phrase needs the preposition 'on' before 'a daily basis.' Also replace 'use' with 'wear' and ensure pronoun 'them' refers to T-shirts.

× Uh, yes, I spend a lot of time during soothing clothes whenever I have to go outside.

✓ Uh, yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes whenever I have to go outside.

'During soothing clothes' is ungrammatical; likely meant 'choosing clothes.' Replace incorrect phrase with correct verb 'choose' in -ing form 'choosing' and remove unnecessary word 'during.'

× Uh, it took me a lot of time to choose the right clothes.

✓ It takes me a lot of time to choose the right clothes.

The question asks about habitual action; use present tense 'takes' rather than past 'took.' Use simple present for routines and habits.