Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: The response does not answer the question. Give a direct topic sentence stating the kind of clothes you like, and optionally add one brief reason. Keep it natural and concise (max 5 sentences).

例: I usually prefer casual, comfortable clothes such as loose T‑shirts and jeans because they let me move freely and feel relaxed. For special occasions I might choose smarter outfits like a button‑up shirt and tailored trousers to look more polished.

提案: Good direct answer and contrast. Make it slightly more natural by tightening phrasing and correcting small mistakes (e.g., "on a daily basis", remove repeated words). Add one specific example to support your preference and use a linking word for coherence. Keep within five sentences.

例: I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes on a daily basis because they are practical and suit my routine. However, when I attend formal events like a job interview or a wedding, I opt for smart clothes such as a blazer and dress shoes to make a good impression.

提案: Good simple answer with reasons. Improve by using more precise vocabulary (e.g., "breathable and loose"), correcting agreement ("in them" not "in it"), and adding a short example or context. Use a linking word to connect reason and example.

例: Yes, I do because T‑shirts are breathable and loose, so they keep me cool in warm weather. For example, on hot summer days I always choose a cotton T‑shirt over heavier tops because it feels much more comfortable.

提案: The answer addresses the question but has hesitation and repetition. Reduce fillers (uh, umm), combine short sentences into a clear, coherent response, correct grammar ("I am an indecisive person", "my go‑to T‑shirts that are"). Add a brief reason or example of when this happens. Keep it under five sentences.

例: Yes, I spend quite a lot of time choosing clothes because I'm an indecisive person and want to pick something that suits the occasion. As a result, I usually stick to my go‑to cotton T‑shirts because they are comfortable and save me decision‑making time.

× No, no, no.

✓ No, no, no.

Although repetitive 'No, no, no.' is not a grammatical error per se, it is a sentence fragment and does not answer the examiner's question. This falls under sentence structure issues because there is no verb or clear response. Suggestion: give a full sentence answering the question, for example 'I prefer casual clothes.' or 'I like comfortable clothes.' to provide a complete response.

× I would prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes on the daily basis.

✓ I would prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes on a daily basis.

The phrase 'on the daily basis' uses an incorrect article and word order. The correct idiom is 'on a daily basis'. Use the indefinite article 'a' with 'daily basis'. Suggestion: replace 'on the daily basis' with 'on a daily basis' or simply 'daily'.

× However, if I had a a place to go to, I would definitely choose to wear smart clothes to look good.

✓ However, if I had a place to go, I would definitely choose to wear smart clothes to look good.

There is a duplicate article 'a a' and an unnecessary trailing preposition 'to' after 'go'. This is a sentence structure issue. Remove the extra 'a' and the final 'to'. Suggestion: write 'if I had a place to go' or 'if I had somewhere to go'.

× Yes I do, because they are breathable and flowy and you feel more comfortable in it than any other kind of cloth.

✓ Yes, I do, because they are breathable and flowy, and you feel more comfortable in them than in any other kind of clothing.

There is a pronoun agreement error: 'they' (plural) is used correctly, but later 'it' (singular) incorrectly refers to the plural 'T-shirts'. Also 'cloth' is an uncountable noun here; 'clothing' or 'fabric' is better. Suggestion: use 'them' to match 'they' and 'clothing' for a general category. Add commas for clarity.

× I do actually spend a lot of time choosing clothes.

✓ I actually spend a lot of time choosing clothes.

Using 'do' for emphasis is grammatically possible, but in spoken answers it is redundant. This sentence fits present simple and sounds more natural without the auxiliary 'do'. Suggestion: remove 'do' unless you want strong emphasis: 'I do spend a lot of time...' with stress on 'do'.

× Uh, since I am uh, an indecisive individual.

✓ I am an indecisive person.

This fragment begins with a subordinating conjunction 'since' but lacks a main clause, making it a sentence structure error. Also 'uh' fillers should be omitted in written answers. Suggestion: combine with the previous sentence or make it a complete sentence: 'I am an indecisive person.' or 'Since I am indecisive, it takes me a long time to decide.'

× Umm, it takes a lot of time and energy for me to decide on clothes.

✓ It takes a lot of time and energy for me to decide on what to wear.

The original is understandable but 'decide on clothes' is slightly awkward. Use 'decide on what to wear' for natural phrasing. Remove filler 'Umm'. Tense (present simple) is correct.

× That's why I always prefer my go to T-shirts that's comfortable and breathable.

✓ That's why I always prefer my go-to T-shirts that are comfortable and breathable.

There are pronoun and agreement errors: 'that's' (that is) before 'comfortable' is singular but refers to plural 'T-shirts', so use 'that are'. Also 'go to' as a compound adjective should be hyphenated 'go-to'. Suggestion: use 'T-shirts that are' and hyphenate 'go-to'.