Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (umm, uh), correct grammar (plural/singular agreement), and give one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words to make it coherent.

例: I usually prefer comfortable, baggy clothes. For example, I like loose shirts and relaxed jeans because they make me feel comfortable and suit my build. Also, baggy styles match my casual personal style.

提案: Answer directly with a clear main sentence, then give two specific examples with linking words (for example, however). Reduce repetition and fix grammar (singular/plural, pronouns). Keep under five sentences.

例: It depends on the situation: I prefer casual clothes most of the time. For work I usually wear loose jeans and a simple shirt because it is comfortable. However, when I go to college I choose slightly smarter casuals so I look presentable.

提案: Be natural and avoid repetition; combine short sentences into one clear response and correct grammar (preferably, all the time). Add a brief reason with a linking word.

例: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts. I wear them at home and when I go out because they are comfortable and I feel they suit me.

提案: Give a clear direct answer, then explain briefly with specific examples. Remove filler words and correct tense/word choice (decided, outfits). Keep it to two or three sentences.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes. I have separate outfits for work, college and home, so I usually know in advance what to wear.

× I love to wear different kind of stuff, different kind of material, but more specifically, I love to wear the comfortable and the baggy clothes because, umm, definitely my height is good and I'm little chubby.

✓ I love to wear different kinds of stuff, different kinds of materials, but more specifically, I love to wear comfortable, baggy clothes because, umm, my height is fine and I'm a little chubby.

Plurals: 'different kind' should be 'different kinds' and 'material' should be 'materials' to match plural noun 'stuff' and general meaning. Article and adjective order: remove unnecessary 'the' before uncountable adjective phrases and use 'comfortable, baggy clothes' with adjective order. Add 'a' before 'little chubby' to form 'a little chubby'. Suggestions: use plural forms for general categories and include appropriate articles before adjectives describing a person. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× So I think, uh, uh, the loose clothes fits best to my personality.

✓ So I think the loose clothes fit my personality best.

'Clothes' is plural, so the verb must be plural: 'fit' not 'fits'. Also 'fit my personality best' is the natural word order; avoid extra preposition 'to'. Suggestions: identify plural subjects and use plural verbs; keep natural adjective/adverb order. Grammar problem type ID: 27

× So my preference towards wearing a cloth basically depends upon the situation and depends upon the place where I am visiting.

✓ My preference for what I wear basically depends on the situation and the place I am visiting.

'Preference towards' is acceptable but 'preference for' is more natural here; 'depends upon' can be simplified to 'depends on'. Also 'where I am visiting' is unnatural; use 'the place I am visiting'. Suggestions: use 'depends on' for situations and 'preference for' for choices. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× So basically on my work, I, I, I wear always, I wear a loose Jean and a loose, a normal shirt, uh, which is my, basically the work outfit.

✓ At work I always wear loose jeans and a plain shirt, which is basically my work outfit.

Article and countable noun errors: 'on my work' should be 'at work'. 'Jean' should be plural 'jeans' and does not need 'a'. 'a loose, a normal shirt' is redundant; use 'a plain shirt'. Remove extra articles and filler words. Suggestions: use 'jeans' (plural), place adverb 'always' before main verb, and use concise adjective phrases. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× But whenever I'm going to college, I want to look more like a student. So I, we are little casual clothes.

✓ But whenever I go to college, I want to look more like a student, so I wear slightly more casual clothes.

Tense and structure: use simple present 'I go' for habitual action. The original 'I, we are little casual clothes' is ungrammatical; intended meaning is 'I wear slightly more casual clothes'. Suggestions: use 'wear' to describe clothing habits and 'slightly' or 'a bit' to modify 'casual'. Grammar problem type ID:26

× So it basically depends upon the place I am visiting.

✓ So it basically depends on the place I am visiting.

This repeats earlier preposition issue and is correct with 'depends on'. No pronoun error; correction addresses preposition. Suggestions: use 'depends on' consistently. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Yes, of course. I definitely love wearing T-shirts a lot. I preferably a wear T-shirts all the times at my home or whenever I'm going out because I feel more comfortable comfortable and I feel more cute in T-shirts.

✓ Yes, of course. I definitely love wearing T-shirts. I prefer to wear T-shirts most of the time at home or when I go out because I feel more comfortable and cuter in them.

Use correct verb forms: 'preferably a wear' is incorrect—use 'I prefer to wear' or 'I prefer wearing'. 'All the times' should be 'most of the time'. 'Whenever I'm going out' is better as 'when I go out'. 'More cute' should be 'cuter'. Also avoid repeating 'comfortable'. Suggestions: use 'prefer to + verb' or 'prefer + -ing', use comparative adjective 'cuter', and 'most of the time' for frequency. Grammar problem type ID:8

× No, I don't spend a lot of time on choosing my attire, OK, what I'm gonna wear.

✓ No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing my clothes or deciding what I'm going to wear.

Remove unnecessary preposition 'on' after 'spend time' when followed by verb + -ing: use 'spend time choosing'. Use 'going to' in full form 'going to' rather than 'gonna' in formal speech. Suggestions: use 'spend time' + verb-ing and avoid informal contractions in formal answers. Grammar problem type ID:4

× So I don't take much time to decide because my things are already decide because I have different work clothes, I have different college clothes.

✓ So I don't take much time to decide because my outfits are already decided: I have different work clothes and different college clothes.

Use past participle 'decided' after 'are' for passive meaning, not base form 'decide'. 'Things' is vague; use 'outfits'. Suggestions: use 'are decided' or 'I've already decided' and more precise nouns like 'outfits' or 'clothes for work'. Grammar problem type ID:9

× I have, I have different home clothes. So I basically, umm, uh, make my uh, different, uh, sports for my different kind of clothes and my wardrobe.

✓ I have different clothes for home. So I basically organize my wardrobe by categories for different kinds of clothes.

Original is ungrammatical and unclear: 'make my different sports' is nonsensical. Likely intended meaning is 'organize my wardrobe by categories'. Use clear verbs like 'organize' and plural 'kinds of clothes'. Suggestions: avoid fillers, use clear vocabulary for organizing clothes (organize, sort, categories, wardrobe). Grammar problem type ID:26