Headphones— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clear and concise: answer directly, correct grammar, and avoid unclear phrases. Mention why you stopped using them with specific details and use linking words. Keep to one to three sentences.

例: No, I don't. I had a pair that produced great sound, but they caused ear pain, so I stopped using them and now I prefer listening through my phone's speakers when I'm at home.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence naming the type, then give two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid irrelevant or confusing descriptions and correct basic grammar.

例: I used to use lightweight on-ear headphones. They were comfortable and easy to carry, so I often wore them when I hung out with friends.

提案: Structure the answer: state typical situations, then give brief reasons with linking words. Use correct verb forms and provide one clear example instead of incomplete fragments.

例: I usually use headphones when I run and when I practice English, because they give clear sound. For example, I listen to podcasts while jogging to improve my pronunciation.

提案: Answer directly and expand with a specific reason and linking word. Use correct grammar and contrast phrases to make your point clear.

例: I wouldn't use headphones when I'm talking with my family because I prefer face-to-face conversations so I can see their expressions.

提案: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with a specific condition and a linking phrase. Use correct time expressions and vocabulary (e.g., "ears" not "air").

例: They can be uncomfortable if worn for more than three hours, so I usually limit use to two hours at a time to avoid ear pain.

× No I don't, I used to have a pair of headphones that sound amazing but they leads to air pain so I quit using them and now I prefer listening through the airport.

✓ No, I don't. I used to have a pair of headphones that sounded amazing, but they caused ear pain, so I stopped using them and now I prefer listening through speakers at the airport.

Multiple past-tense actions and causation require past tense forms: 'sound' should be 'sounded' to match 'used to have'; 'leads' is present tense and should be 'caused' (past) to match sequence; 'air pain' is incorrect word choice—use 'ear pain'; 'quit using them' is acceptable but 'stopped using them' is more natural. Also add punctuation and small wording changes for clarity.

× I used to have a restaurant headphones when I tried I like it because it's so it was lightweight and so beautiful and so you easy to use.

✓ I used to have a pair of headphones from a brand called 'Restaurant' when I tried them; I liked them because they were lightweight, attractive, and very easy to use.

Sentence has adjective and pronoun errors and inconsistent tense. 'Restaurant headphones' seems wrong; I assumed 'a pair of headphones from a brand called Restaurant' or could be 'cheap/cheap-looking'—here corrected to a name. 'I tried I like it' mixes past and present; change to past: 'I tried them; I liked them'. 'It's so it was lightweight' is incorrect; use 'they were lightweight'. 'so beautiful and so you easy to use' -> 'attractive and very easy to use' fixes adjective/adverb misuse and word order.

× I usually wore is the with T-shirts when I hang hang out with.

✓ I usually wore them with T-shirts when I hung out.

Pronoun/article confusion and tense: 'wore is the' is incorrect—use 'them' referring to headphones. 'with T-shirts' is fine. 'when I hang hang out with' should be past 'when I hung out'. Remove unnecessary words.

× I use headphone to run listening to music and to practice English because that of quality sound.

✓ I use headphones when I run to listen to music and to practice English because of the good sound quality.

Use plural 'headphones' (common collocation). 'to run listening to music' should be 'when I run to listen to music'. 'that of quality sound' is ungrammatical; correct to 'because of the good sound quality'.

× It is a clear and amazing.

✓ The sound is clear and amazing.

Replace vague pronoun 'It' with specific noun 'The sound' and fix word order: adjectives describe 'sound'. Also 'amazing' is adjective; 'clear and amazing' modifies 'sound'.

× I also wear them when I hang out with my friends. For example, I where is the.

✓ I also wear them when I hang out with my friends. For example, I wear them at social gatherings.

Second sentence 'For example, I where is the.' is ungrammatical and incomplete. Provide a complete, relevant example: 'I wear them at social gatherings' to match context.

× I will not use the headphone when I communication with my family.

✓ I will not use headphones when I communicate with my family.

Use plural 'headphones' and the correct verb form 'communicate' after 'when I'. 'I will not use' is acceptable for future intention; keep modal but correct noun and verb.

× I want to meet face to face instead by a headphone or online call.

✓ I want to meet face-to-face instead of using headphones or making an online call.

Use preposition 'instead of' to show contrast. 'face to face' is usually hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used adjectivally/adverbially. 'by a headphone' is wrong; use 'using headphones' and 'making an online call' or 'having an online call'.

× Now they will hurt your ear if you wear more than three hours per times, so I usually use it two hours per time to protect my air.

✓ Now they will hurt your ears if you wear them for more than three hours at a time, so I usually use them for two hours at a time to protect my ears.

Pronouns and nouns: use plural 'ears' and plural pronoun 'them' for 'headphones'. Use 'for more than three hours at a time' and 'at a time' rather than 'per times/time'. 'protect my air' is a misspelling; should be 'protect my ears'. Also use 'use them for two hours at a time' for clarity.