Music— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is natural and directly addresses the question with a clear reason. To improve, vary your vocabulary and add one specific example to make it more vivid. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences) and avoid repeating the same idea.

例: I prefer happy music because it instantly improves my mood after a long day at work. For example, upbeat pop or indie tracks with lively rhythms help me feel more energetic and relaxed when I commute home.

提案: Your response answers directly but repeats 'excited' and is slightly redundant. Improve by using varied vocabulary, a linking word, and a brief specific detail about which elements of music excite you.

例: Absolutely — happy music energizes me because of its driving rhythms and bright melodies. For instance, fast drum patterns and catchy hooks often boost my energy and make me want to move.

提案: You answer the question but contain grammatical errors and repetition. Improve grammar (past tense and phrasing), use linking words to show contrast, and be more concise. Add a specific detail about what kind of music you like now to enrich the response.

例: No, I haven't. I wasn't interested in music when I was younger because I focused on sports and art, but now I regret that decision. Lately I enjoy acoustic folk and pop, and I wish I had taken lessons to learn an instrument.

提案: Your answer is clear and concise. To improve, include a linking word and a brief specific example of tasks during which you avoid music, and optionally mention an exception to show nuance.

例: Not usually, because music distracts me and I concentrate better in silence when I'm studying or working. However, I sometimes listen to instrumental ambient tracks while doing household chores.

× Absolutely happy music makes me feel more excited, especially the rhythms and sounds make me feel very excited.

✓ Absolutely, happy music makes me feel more excited; especially the rhythms and sounds make me feel very excited.

Missing comma after introductory adverb 'Absolutely' and run-on sentence. Add punctuation to separate clauses for clarity. Also repetition 'make me feel very excited' is stylistic but not grammatical; consider varying wording. Suggestion: Add a comma after introductory words and use a semicolon or conjunction to join related independent clauses.

× No, I haven't because I didn't get a chance to go to music classes because I didn't interested in music.

✓ No, I haven't, because I didn't get a chance to go to music classes and I wasn't interested in music.

Incorrect verb form after 'didn't' — 'interested' requires a form of be (was/were) rather than 'didn't interested'. Also avoid repeating 'because' twice; use 'and' or restructure. Suggestion: use past simple 'wasn't interested' and combine clauses logically.

× Now I feel a bit regret because I really like music now.

✓ Now I feel a bit of regret because I really like music now.

The noun 'regret' requires the determiner 'a bit of' when quantified. Alternatively use adjective 'regretful' or phrase 'I regret it'. Suggestion: say 'I feel a bit of regret' or 'I regret it' for natural English.

× No, not really, because I find it very distracting so I can concentrate better when I don't listen to music.

✓ No, not really, because I find it very distracting, so I can concentrate better when I don't listen to music.

Missing comma before coordinating conjunction 'so' joining independent clauses. Comma improves readability. Also sentence is otherwise grammatically correct; ensure pause with comma.