Music— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a clear direct answer first (e.g., "I prefer happy music") and then add one or two short, specific reasons. Use linking words like "because" or "so" and avoid unclear phrases or numbers. Keep to at most 3–4 sentences.

例: I prefer happy music because it lifts my mood and helps me concentrate. For example, upbeat pop songs make me feel energetic when I'm working out or studying, so I often choose them.

提案: Expand beyond a one-word answer by giving a brief explanation or example. Use linking words such as "Yes, because…" or "Yes. For example…" to make your response coherent and natural. Aim for 2–3 sentences.

例: Yes, because the lively rhythm and cheerful melodies boost my energy. For example, when I listen to happy songs before going out, I feel more excited and motivated.

提案: Start with a clear, grammatical sentence: "No, I haven't taken any music classes." Then give a short reason or additional detail, using linking words like "but" or "however" if you add contrast. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

例: No, I haven't taken any music classes, but I learned some songs by watching tutorials online. However, I would like to take formal lessons one day to improve my technique.

提案: Give a concise topic sentence and add specific activities and a linking phrase to explain why. Correct subject-verb agreement and use natural collocations ("make me feel relaxed/enjoy myself"). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

例: Yes, I often listen to music while studying or cooking because it helps me relax and stay focused. For instance, soft acoustic tracks help me concentrate when I'm reading, while upbeat songs make chores more enjoyable.

× 2 music. I also like it.

✓ I like sad music.

The original sentence '2 music' is not grammatically correct; it seems the student meant 'sad music' but used a number. Also use of 'music' is uncountable here and does not need an article. Provide a clear noun phrase: 'I like sad music.' Suggestions: ensure you say the emotion (sad/happy) and use 'music' as an uncountable noun without a numeral.

× It's make me feel relaxed and enjoy.

✓ It makes me feel relaxed and happy.

The subject 'It' is third person singular, so the verb requires an -s ending: 'makes' not 'make'. Also 'enjoy' needs an object or should be replaced with an adjective; here 'happy' fits the meaning. Suggestion: match verb form to subject (he/she/it + verb+s) and use a complete predicate (e.g., 'feel relaxed and happy').

× I didn't take any music class.

✓ I haven't taken any music classes.

The question used present perfect 'Have you taken...?', so the expected answer is present perfect. 'Didn't take' is simple past and mismatches the question's timeframe. Also use plural 'classes' as it is more natural when talking about lessons in general. Suggestion: answer using present perfect for experiences: 'I haven't taken any music classes.'