Teachers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更简洁并使用连贯词，纠正语法和发音错误。例如把过去事件用过去时，避免重复。尽量一到两句点出重点，再用一两句具体例子支持。

例: Yes. My favourite teacher was my primary school English teacher because she was very kind. For example, when I failed an exam she comforted me and gave extra lessons, which helped me improve quickly.

提案: 回答需注意句子完整与语法，用连接词表示原因，并提供具体细节。避免碎片句和词序错误，使用动名词或从句解释原因。

例: Yes, I definitely want to be a teacher in the future because it relates to my major and I enjoy working with children. Teaching makes me feel fulfilled and relaxed, and I like helping students learn.

提案: 避免重复前一题内容，使用更准确词汇并修正错误（failed exam, extra lessons）。回答时加入具体细节或结果以展示影响。

例: Yes, I remember my primary school English teacher because she was very patient. When I failed an exam she gave me extra lessons and study tips, which helped me raise my grade the next term.

提案: 注意语法时态和介词使用（visit teacher, during weekends -> on weekends），并用连接词使句子流畅。补充具体频率或交流方式使内容更具体。

例: Yes, I often visit my primary school English teacher on weekends and we also keep in touch on social media. She still gives me advice and encouragement, which I really appreciate.

提案: 修正语法（gives feedback, when I have difficulties），使用自然表达（give feedback, provide help, teach me methods to solve problems），并尽量提供具体例子说明帮助方式。

例: She always gave me helpful feedback on my homework, both in class and online. For example, when I struggled with grammar she explained rules clearly and showed practice exercises to improve.

提案: 回答要更清晰、用词准确（companions? company -> companionship or memories），并修正语法和表达（I can't forget it）。给出具体原因和对比细节。

例: I prefer my primary school teachers because their kindness and companionship shaped my childhood. Their support left precious memories that I still cherish, unlike the more formal atmosphere in high school.

× Yes I do have a favorite teacher when I was in primary school she was my English teacher and she's very NA kind and I remember once I took an exam but I failed to the exam but she comforted me a lot.

✓ Yes, I had a favorite teacher when I was in primary school. She was my English teacher and she was very kind. I remember once I took an exam but failed it; she comforted me a lot.

句子过长且时态不一致（现在时与过去时混用），并包含不必要或错误的词（例如“NA”）。应将内容拆分为多个句子，统一使用过去时描述过去的经历，并把“failed to the exam”改为正确的宾语形式“failed it”。建议：遇到复杂信息时用短句分开，注意描述过去事件时使用过去时。

× Yes definitely I want to be a teacher and I really want the teacher be my career because it's quite relevant to my major and also stay with kids. Made me relax and comfort.

✓ Yes, definitely. I want to be a teacher and I really want teaching to be my career because it's closely related to my major and I want to stay with children. It makes me feel relaxed and comforted.

原句时态和结构混乱："want the teacher be my career" 语序和词类错误，应使用动名词短语"teaching to be my career"。此外“it's quite relevant to my major”可改为更自然的"closely related to my major"；"stay with kids"非正式，改为"stay with children"。最后两个碎句缺主语，应合并或补主语并调整动词时态。建议：注意动词与名词的搭配（动名词表示职业），保持句子完整并用合适词汇表达。

× Yes, I still remember my English teacher when I was in primary school and she's very kind. Once I filed an exam, she comforted me and gave me extra license so that I could improve a lot.

✓ Yes, I still remember my English teacher from primary school; she was very kind. Once I failed an exam, she comforted me and gave me extra lessons so that I could improve a lot.

混淆时态与拼写错误：描述过去事件应使用过去时（she was），"filed an exam" 是拼写错误，应为"failed an exam"。"extra license" 用词不当，应该是"extra lessons"（额外辅导）。建议：复查动词时态和常见动词拼写，确保名词搭配正确（lessons用于教学）。

× Yes, I usually visit my primary school English teacher when I during the weekends and also we often keep in touch with each other on the social media because she is very nice and always encourage me.

✓ Yes, I usually visit my primary school English teacher during the weekends, and we often keep in touch with each other on social media because she is very nice and always encourages me.

原句多处错误："visit... when I during the weekends" 结构混乱，应为"visit... during the weekends"或"on weekends"。"on the social media" 中定冠词不必要，应为"on social media"。动词一致问题："always encourage me" 主语为'she'，应使用第三人称单数"encourages"。建议：注意固定介词短语（on social media, during the weekend(s) / on weekends）并检查主谓一致。

× She always give me an efficient feedback on my homework and for example online. When I homework meet some difficulties, she always provide helps and teach me the methods to touch it.

✓ She always gives me useful feedback on my homework, for example online. When I encounter difficulties with my homework, she always provides help and teaches me methods to tackle them.

多处动词形式和搭配错误："give" 和 "provide" 与主语'she'不一致，应为"gives"、"provides"；"an efficient feedback" 用词不当，feedback通常不可数，应为"useful feedback"；"When I homework meet" 结构错误，应为"When I encounter difficulties with my homework"；"provide helps" 改为不可数名词"provide help"或动词短语"give help"；"teach me the methods to touch it" 用词错误，"touch" 应为 'tackle'（解决）。建议：注意不可数名词用法、主谓一致以及动词短语搭配，使用常见表达如"encounter difficulties"、"tackle problems"。

× These are like my primary school teachers, better. I think the reason is that their companies fill up my childhood and it's really precious that I could not forgot it.

✓ I prefer my primary school teachers. I think the reason is that their company filled my childhood, and those memories are really precious so I cannot forget them.

原句结构和用词不当："These are like my primary school teachers, better" 不通顺，应表达为"I prefer my primary school teachers"。"their companies fill up my childhood" 中"companies"（公司）用词错误，应为"company"（陪伴），并且时态应为过去"filled"；"could not forgot it" 时态和形式错误，应为"cannot forget them"（记忆为复数，且用现在时表达持续不能忘记）。建议：用正确词汇（company=陪伴），注意时态一致和代词单复数一致。