Teachers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cümleniz kısa ve anlaşılır ancak dilbilgisi hataları ve doğal olmayan ifade var. "Sabatini teacher" yerine "my teacher, Sabatini" veya "Mr/Ms Sabatini" demelisiniz. Ayrıca neden favori olduğunu belirten bir cümle ekleyerek cevabı genişletebilirsiniz (maksimum 5 cümle). Bağlaç kullanarak açıklama ekleyin: örneğin "because" ya da "who" ile nedenini belirtin.

例: Yes, I do. My favorite teacher is Mr. Sabatini because he explains difficult topics clearly and makes lessons interesting.

提案: İfade açık ve sebeple desteklenmiş, bu iyi. Ancak dilbilgisi ve doğal kelime sırası üzerinde çalışın: "be teacher" yerine "be a teacher" kullanın; tekrarı azaltın ("I wouldn't want to" gereksiz). Bağlaçları doğru kullanarak cümleleri daha akıcı yapın ve maksimum 5 cümleyi aşmayın.

例: No, I don't want to be a teacher because I think it is a difficult job and I don't consider myself patient enough to handle a classroom.

提案: Cümleniz karışık ve dilbilgisi hataları var, ayrıca anlatım belirsiz. "my teacher learn maths" yerine "my middle school math teacher" demelisiniz. Sebebi açıkça ve mantıklı bağlaçlarla (for example, because, who) ifade edin. Spesifik bir anekdot veya ne öğrettiğini kısaca ekleyin.

例: Yes. My middle school math teacher explained concepts very clearly and gave me useful study tips, and I still remember his advice about practicing problems every day.

提案: Yanıt çok kısa ve yanlış dilbilgisi içeriyor. Doğru ifade "No, I'm not in touch with them" veya kısaca nedenini ekleyerek genişletin (ör. moved away, busy). Bağlaç veya kısa neden cümlesi ekleyerek daha doğal yapın.

例: No, I'm not in touch with them because I moved to a different city and we lost contact.

提案: Mesajınız anlaşılmaya çalışılmış ama kelime seçimi ve yapı hatalı. "ill lessons" ve "sincerity" yanlış kullanılmış; bunun yerine "weak subjects" veya "difficult lessons" ve "trust" kullanın. Zaman uyumuna dikkat edin (present/past). Bağlaçlarla neden-sonuç ilişkisi kurun ve spesifik bir örnek verin.

例: My favorite teacher helped me with difficult lessons, especially math, and also supported me personally by giving advice and encouragement when I had problems.

提案: Cevap eksik ve anlaşılmaz. Önce tercihizi açıkça belirtin (Yes/No), sonra nedeni verin. Tamamlanmamış bir cümleyi düzeltin ve bağlaçlarla destekleyin. Örneğin, hangi öğretmenleri neden daha çok sevdiğinizi açıklayın (approachability, teaching style).

例: I prefer my primary school teachers because they were more patient and created a friendly classroom atmosphere, which made learning enjoyable.

× My favorite teacher is Sabatini teacher.

✓ My favorite teacher is Ms. Sabatini.

The sentence incorrectly repeats 'teacher' and omits the definite article and appropriate title. Use a title or full name with an article or honorific ('Ms.') and do not repeat the noun. Suggestion: use 'Ms. Sabatini' or 'the Sabatini family' if referring to a family name. Ensure articles and titles are used correctly.

× I don't want to be teacher in the future because I think it's a difficult job and I don't think I will be that patient myself, so I wouldn't want to.

✓ I don't want to be a teacher in the future because I think it's a difficult job and I don't think I would be patient enough, so I wouldn't want to.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'teacher'. Also wording 'will be that patient myself' is awkward for hypothetical future; use 'would be' and 'patient enough'. Suggestion: include articles and use conditional 'would' for hypothetical preference.

× Yes there is, my teacher learn maths in middle school was explaining maths very well and my math helped me Advice I still don't forget.

✓ Yes. My middle school math teacher explained math very well, and the advice they gave me is something I still remember.

Multiple tense and structure errors: 'there is' is incorrect; use a direct affirmative. 'learn' should be 'taught' or 'was teaching' but here past simple 'explained' fits. 'my math helped me Advice' is ungrammatical; use 'the advice they gave me'. Use consistent past tense for past events and correct noun forms.

× No, I'm not touch.

✓ No, I'm not in touch.

Missing preposition 'in' required for the phrasal expression 'in touch' meaning 'in contact'. 'I'm not touch' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: use 'in touch' or 'in contact'.

× Of course, they also help with the ill lessons, but it will strengthen the sincerity between us. They will help us us in difficult times by chatting.

✓ Of course, they helped with difficult lessons, and that strengthened the bond between us. They helped us in difficult times by talking with us.

Tense inconsistency and awkward word choice: 'ill lessons' is incorrect; use 'difficult lessons'. Shift to past tense to match context ('helped', 'strengthened'). Duplicate word 'us us' removed. 'Chatting' is informal; 'talking with us' is clearer. Suggestions: maintain consistent past tense and choose correct vocabulary.

× I more than high school teacher or primary school teacher because I'm.

✓ I prefer my primary school teachers to my high school teachers because I feel closer to them.

Sentence fragment and poor structure: 'I more than...' is incomplete and lacks a verb. Need comparative structure 'prefer X to Y' and an explanation clause. Suggestion: use 'prefer X to Y' and complete the reason after 'because'.