Tidiness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason with a linking word. Correct verb forms and articles (e.g., "it's" → "it makes" or "it's easier"). Avoid repeating general statements.

例: Yes, I do. I keep my things tidy because it makes my room look pleasant and it's much easier to find anything I need. For example, when my desk is organized I can quickly locate my notebook and pens, so I waste less time.

提案: Give a direct, clearly structured response. Use the correct tense and comparative forms (e.g., "when I was a child"). Provide a brief specific example showing the change over time and a linking word to contrast past and present.

例: Not really. When I was a child I was quite messy, but now I keep my room much tidier. For instance, I now make my bed every morning and put my toys or clothes away, which I rarely did as a kid.

提案: Use a clear topic sentence and correct grammar (e.g., "I organize my workspace"). Add one or two specific routines with linking words to show habits. Keep it concise and natural.

例: I organize my study space every day after finishing work. For example, I file away papers, charge my devices, and wipe the desk surface so I can start fresh the next day.

提案: State your opinion directly, then give a specific reason and an example. Improve word choice (e.g., "clear" → "clear-headed"; "focused to" → "focused on"). Keep sentences natural and link ideas with words like "because" or "so".

例: Yes, I do. Being tidy helps me feel clear-headed and more focused on my tasks because there are fewer distractions. For example, when my desk is uncluttered I can concentrate better and finish work faster.

× Yes, I like to keep all of my things tidy because it's good for your room and it easier to find something that you need.

✓ Yes, I like to keep all of my things tidy because it's good for your room and it is easier to find something that you need.

The sentence omits the auxiliary verb 'is' before 'easier'. This is an adjective/adverb usage issue where the comparative adjective 'easier' needs the linking verb 'is' to form a correct predicate. Suggestion: include the verb 'is' ('it is easier') or use a contraction ('it's easier').

× I would say no compared to nowadays when I grew up. I keep my room tidy more than I am a child.

✓ I would say no compared to nowadays when I was a child. I keep my room tidier now than I did as a child.

Several issues: 'when I grew up' is incorrect here; use 'when I was a child' for the past time reference. 'more than I am a child' shows wrong structure and tense and incorrect comparison form. Use comparative 'tidier' and compare present with past using 'than I did as a child.' Also subject-verb agreement and tense consistency require past auxiliary 'was' and past simple 'did.'

× I am organised my work or study place every day after finish work.

✓ I organise my work or study place every day after I finish work.

The original mixes present continuous 'am organised' with an object and omits the subject 'I' before 'finish.' This is a sentence structure error: use simple present 'I organise' for habitual action and include the subject 'I' and verb form 'finish' with appropriate word order: 'after I finish work.' Alternatively, 'I am organised' could be rephrased as 'I keep my work area organised,' but to match the habitual sense use 'I organise.'

× I think it is necessary because when the table or the workstation are tidy it will make you more clear and focused to your work.

✓ I think it is necessary because when the table or the workstation is tidy, it will make you clearer and more focused on your work.

Multiple errors: 'table or the workstation are tidy' has subject-verb disagreement and article inconsistency; use singular verb 'is' if considering each item ('the table or the workstation is tidy') or better rephrase. 'More clear' should be comparative adjective 'clearer.' Preposition 'to your work' is incorrect; use 'focused on your work.' Also add a comma before the result clause. Suggestion: 'when the table or workstation is tidy, it will make you clearer and more focused on your work.'