Tidiness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 用更简洁自然的话直接回答并用一到两句具体理由支撑，减少重复与语填充词。注意语法小错误（如 “too” 应为 “to” 或不需要，rooms 单复数与定冠词my room 或 my rooms 需一致），以及避免冗长句子。可以用连接词（because, so, which）让逻辑更清晰。

例: Yes, I do. I prefer to keep my room tidy because a clutter-free space helps me concentrate better. For example, when my desk is organized I can finish difficult tasks more quickly and feel less stressed.

提案: 回答要用恰当的时态并避免重复。直接用过去时描述习惯（used to 或 past simple），并给出一到两点具体原因或例子。删掉多余的填充词和重复短语，使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I used to. When I was a child I kept my room tidy because I lived by myself and had to look after my things. For instance, I always put my toys away after playing so I could find them easily later.

× I think so, I like too keep my rooms clean and tidy because I think if you live in a mess, messy uh situation, you will feel upset and depressed and your brain is not so clear to solve some problems that may be challenging and difficult.

✓ I think so. I like to keep my room clean and tidy because I think if you live in a messy situation, you will feel upset and depressed and your mind is not clear enough to solve problems that may be challenging and difficult.

错误类型: 动词不定式与拼写/名词单复数和词序问题。解释: 原句中用錯了 “too keep”（应为不定式 to keep，而 too 表示“太”），并且 “my rooms” 与语境不符，通常说 “my room”；“mess, messy uh situation” 冗余且词序混乱，应改为 “a messy situation”；“your brain is not so clear to solve some problems” 表达不自然，建议用 “your mind is not clear enough to solve problems”。改进建议: 注意区分 too（表示“太”）和不定式符号 to；名词单复数要根据语境选择；避免重复修饰词，保持简洁自然；用 clear enough + to do 结构表达“足够清晰以便做某事”。

× Yes, absolutely. I did keep my room tidy when I'm at my young age, Uh, because when I'm a little girl, I usually lived alone and I have to, I had to take care of myself and get everything done and got everything done. Yes, I think so.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I did keep my room tidy when I was young, because when I was a little girl I usually lived alone and I had to take care of myself and get everything done.

错误类型: 过去时使用不当。解释: 原句混用现在时和过去时（例如“I'm at my young age”，“when I'm a little girl”用了现在时），与叙述过去经历的语境不一致。还出现了重复表达 “get everything done and got everything done”。改进建议: 回忆过去的事情时应使用过去时态，如用 was、had to、did 等；避免重复相同意思的短语；把冗长的语句分成更简洁的句子。