Tidiness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is brief and clear but could be improved by giving a direct topic sentence about yourself, adding one or two specific reasons or examples, and using a linking word to connect ideas. Keep it natural and avoid vague phrasing like "it's important" without elaboration.

例: Yes — I like to keep things tidy because a neat environment helps me concentrate. For example, when my desk is organised I can find documents quickly, which saves time and reduces stress.

提案: The answer addresses the question but mixes past and present tense awkwardly and is repetitive. Start with a clear past-tense topic sentence, then give a specific supporting detail (reason or short example) using a linking word. Also correct grammar ("preferred" or rephrase) and avoid absolute statements like "all the time."

例: Yes, I did. When I was a child I usually kept my room tidy because my parents encouraged me to put toys away; as a result, I rarely lost things and it was easier to do my homework.

× Yes, of course it's important.

✓ Yes, of course; it's important.

The original sentence is not ungrammatical but using a comma after 'of course' is acceptable; a semicolon or a pause improves clarity. However this is primarily punctuation rather than a listed grammar category; to keep it simple, we recommend using a pause (semicolon) to separate the interjection 'of course' from the main clause. Suggestion: insert appropriate punctuation to make the spoken response clearer.

× Yes I did. I always prefer to have clean room all the time.

✓ Yes, I did. I always preferred to have a clean room all the time.

The question 'Did you use to keep your room tidy as a child?' asks about past habits, so the student should use past tense. 'Prefer' should be in the past 'preferred'. Additionally, 'room' needs the singular count noun article 'a' (covered under article errors but corrected here to make a grammatical sentence). Also the phrase 'always ... all the time' is redundant; keep one. Improved: 'Yes, I did. I always preferred to have a clean room.' Suggestions: Use past tense for past habits (preferred), include the article 'a' before singular countable nouns ('a clean room'), and avoid redundant adverbial phrasing.