Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (use 'landscapes are' or 'a landscape is'), and give one specific reason with a brief example. Use a linking word if you add a detail.

例: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing landscapes because each one is unique, whether it's a natural scene or something man-made. For example, I like capturing the way light falls on a mountain at sunrise, which always looks different.

提案: Answer directly then give a clear contrast using linking words (e.g., 'while' or 'however'). Fix grammar (plural agreement, articles) and be specific about what you like in each setting.

例: I prefer both kinds of views. Rural areas offer peaceful natural landscapes and wide-open spaces, while urban areas provide striking architecture and lively street scenes, so I enjoy photographing both depending on my mood.

提案: Start with a direct answer and then give specific comparisons with correct grammar and linking words (e.g., 'for example'). Use concrete details and avoid vague words like 'different and various'.

例: I don't have a strong preference — I like views everywhere. For example, Vietnam has lush green rice terraces, whereas Japan is famous for pink cherry blossoms in spring, so I enjoy photographing landscapes in both countries.

× Yes I do because landscape is a very various of natural or man made and I don't like the same picture with the similar view.

✓ Yes, I do because landscapes are very varied, natural or man-made, and I don't like taking the same picture with a similar view.

The sentence misuses adjectives and noun forms. 'landscape is a very various of' is incorrect: 'landscape' should be plural 'landscapes' to match general meaning (singular/plural and noun form), 'very various' is not idiomatic — use 'very varied' or 'very diverse', and 'natural or man made' needs a hyphen 'man-made'. Also 'the same picture with the similar view' is awkward; use 'taking the same picture with a similar view' to clarify the action. Suggestion: pluralize countable nouns when speaking generally, use correct adjective forms, and include hyphens in compound adjectives.

× Actually I prefer both type of view.

✓ Actually, I prefer both types of view.

The quantifier 'both' requires a plural noun, so 'type' should be 'types'. Also add a comma after 'Actually' for natural pacing. Suggestion: when using 'both', ensure the noun that follows is plural.

× For example a rural area have natural landscape but in the urban we it have a many tall building and elegant.

✓ For example, a rural area has natural landscapes, but in urban areas there are many tall and elegant buildings.

Multiple errors: subject-verb agreement ('a rural area have' should be 'a rural area has'), pluralization ('natural landscape' -> 'natural landscapes' when speaking generally), incorrect phrase 'in the urban we it have' is ungrammatical — use 'in urban areas there are', quantifier and noun agreement ('a many tall building' -> 'many tall and elegant buildings'), and word order ('tall and elegant buildings'). Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement, use plural forms for general statements, and use 'there are' to introduce existence in plural.

× Actually, I like every kind of view in the world.

✓ Actually, I like every kind of view in the world.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable, but 'every kind of view' is singular and correct. No correction needed. Suggestion: keep as is; ensure punctuation with a comma after 'Actually' as included.

× Country have the different and various landscape and in Vietnam we can have the green landscapes, in Japan we have pink cherry blossoms.

✓ Countries have different and various landscapes: in Vietnam we have green landscapes, and in Japan we have pink cherry blossoms.

Errors include singular/plural mismatch ('Country have' -> 'Countries have' or 'The country has'), subject-verb agreement ('have' must agree with plural 'countries'), and noun/adjective use ('different and various landscape' -> 'different and various landscapes'). Also improve sentence flow by adding a connector and punctuation. Suggestion: use plural 'countries' when speaking generally, ensure verb agreement, and separate ideas with punctuation or conjunctions.