Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your response more natural and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, limit length to 2–3 concise sentences, and add one specific detail. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, “and” or “also”).

例: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, especially natural scenes. For example, I often take pictures of ocean views and mountain landscapes, and I also capture interesting cityscapes when I visit towns.

提案: Improve grammar and clarity: give one clear preference statement, follow with 1–2 specific reasons using linking words (because, so, and). Avoid vague phrases and incorrect verb forms; use correct adjectives and expressions (e.g., “I feel afraid of busy cities” → “I find urban areas overwhelming”).

例: I prefer rural areas because I grew up in the countryside and feel more relaxed there. For example, the quiet fields and forests make me feel free and calm, whereas busy cities often feel crowded and stressful.

提案: Clarify and correct grammar, and provide a concise reason plus a specific example. Use proper comparative forms (e.g., “bigger” not “more bigger”) and linking words like “for example” or “because.”

例: I prefer views in other countries because they often feel different and more impressive to me. For example, I visited a national park in the USA that was much larger and wilder than the parks I have seen in Korea.

× I like taking pictures of different views like nature sights including ocean view, mountains and I like to taking pictures of the landscape of city.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views, such as natural sights including ocean views and mountains, and I like taking pictures of city landscapes.

The phrase 'I like to taking' mixes infinitive and -ing form; after 'like' use either 'like to take' or 'like taking' consistently. 'Nature sights' should be 'natural sights' or 'nature scenes'; 'ocean view' should be plural 'ocean views' to match list; 'landscape of city' should be 'city landscapes' or 'the landscape of the city'. Also punctuation and parallel structure were improved for clarity.

× I like rural areas because I'm from countryside.

✓ I like rural areas because I'm from the countryside.

The noun 'countryside' normally requires the definite article 'the' when referring to the general rural area where someone is from: 'the countryside'. Omitting the article is ungrammatical in this context.

× Also urban areas fears me.

✓ Also, urban areas frighten me.

'Fears me' is incorrect because 'fear' is normally used with people as subject and object reversed: something 'frightens' or 'scares' someone. Use the verb 'frighten' or 'scare' with 'urban areas' as the subject and 'me' as the object. Added a comma after 'Also' for clarity.

× Frustrated sometimes but the rural areas like nature sites makes me freedom free.

✓ Sometimes I feel frustrated, but rural areas and natural sites make me feel free.

Original sentence had fragmented structure and incorrect word order. 'Frustrated sometimes' lacks a subject; reorder to 'Sometimes I feel frustrated'. 'The rural areas like nature sites' is awkward—use 'rural areas and natural sites'. 'Makes me freedom free' is ungrammatical; use 'make me feel free'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: plural 'areas' take 'make'.

× I prefer other countries views because they first me they makes me feel differently.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because they affect me and make me feel different.

Several issues: 'other countries views' needs a preposition: 'views in other countries' or 'other countries' views' with apostrophe. 'They first me' is nonsensical; likely intended 'they affect me' or 'they impress me'. 'They makes' is subject-verb disagreement; use 'they make'. 'Feel differently' is less natural here than 'feel different'. Combined and clarified meaning.

× I've been to the National Park in the USA and it was more bigger.

✓ I've been to a national park in the USA and it was bigger.

Do not use 'more bigger'—'adjective' already comparatives use either 'bigger' or 'more big' (the latter is incorrect). Use 'a national park' unless a specific park name is given. Present perfect 'I've been' is fine; follow with 'and it was bigger' to compare past impression.

× It was bigger than sites in Korea.

✓ It was bigger than sites in Korea.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable, but 'sites' is vague; 'parks' or 'natural sites in Korea' would be clearer. No structural correction needed other than recommending a clearer noun for comparison.