Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the response grammatically correct, concise, and add one specific detail. Begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers like "uh", and use plurals and verb forms correctly. For example, say why you take photos and give one specific object you like to photograph.

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures because they preserve memories. For example, I often photograph old buildings and colorful flowers when I travel to remember the places I visited.

提案: Provide a direct answer first, then give a brief contrast using linking words (e.g., "however", "on the other hand") and specific examples. Fix grammar ("It depends", "I like busy cities", "relaxed countryside"). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

例: It depends on my mood. Sometimes I prefer busy cities because I enjoy photographing modern architecture and street life; however, at other times I like the relaxed countryside for its peaceful landscapes and farms.

提案: Start with a clear statement and support it with two specific reasons—one for your country and one for other countries. Correct grammar ("unique local food", "other countries I have visited") and avoid vague phrases like "I also want to choose the visitor." Limit to 2–3 sentences.

例: I enjoy both. My country offers unique local food and beautiful landscapes that feel familiar, while visiting places like the UK lets me appreciate different architecture and cultural sights.

× Yes, I would like taking picture because can keep the memories and also can uh take a lot of beautiful buildings, flowers or anything else.

✓ Yes, I would like to take pictures because they can keep memories and I can also take many photos of beautiful buildings, flowers, or other things.

Errors: 'would like taking' uses incorrect verb + -ing; after 'would like' use base form 'to take' (Verb + to-infinitive). 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' (Singular/plural). Missing subject 'they' before 'can keep the memories' and 'can' needs an explicit subject; revise to 'they can keep memories'. 'a lot of beautiful buildings, flowers or anything else' is awkward; use 'many photos of beautiful buildings, flowers, or other things.' Suggestion: use 'would like to + verb', ensure plural nouns when general, include clear subjects for modal verbs, and use natural collocations like 'take photos'.

× It's depends on my feelings on sometimes I like to build some like busy city, while sometimes I like to see a very relaxed uh, buildings and country.

✓ It depends on my feelings. Sometimes I like busy cities, while other times I prefer relaxed buildings and the countryside.

'It's depends' is incorrect: after subject use base verb so 'It depends' (Present tense agreement). 'on sometimes' is misplaced; separate into sentences. 'I like to build some like busy city' is wrong word choice and structure: 'like to build' should be 'like' or 'prefer', and 'busy city' should be plural 'busy cities' if general. 'a very relaxed uh, buildings and country' mixes singular/plural and nouns; use 'relaxed buildings and the countryside' or 'the countryside' alone. Suggestions: use correct subject-verb agreement in present simple, avoid unnecessary 'to' before verbs of preference, use consistent singular/plural forms, and reorder for clarity.

× I enjoy both. My country has a very unique authentic foods and beautiful local landscape.

✓ I enjoy both. My country has very unique, authentic foods and beautiful local landscapes.

'has a very unique authentic foods' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'foods' and uses redundant modifiers. Remove 'a' and pluralize 'landscape' or use 'landscapes'. Also place adjectives in correct order: 'very unique, authentic foods'. Suggestion: match article and noun number, keep adjective order, and pluralize count nouns when referring generally.

× I also want to choose the visitor but I also enjoy the views from others countries that I have been visited such as the UK where I appreciate.

✓ I also want to be a visitor, and I enjoy views from other countries that I have visited, such as the UK, which I appreciate.

'want to choose the visitor' is incorrect pronoun/phrase; likely intended 'want to be a visitor' or 'want to visit'. 'others countries' should be 'other countries' (adjective form). 'that I have been visited' uses passive incorrectly; correct is 'that I have visited'. 'such as the UK where I appreciate' is incomplete; use 'such as the UK, which I appreciate' or 'which I enjoyed.' Suggestions: use correct pronouns and verb forms (active voice 'I have visited'), use 'other' not 'others' before plural noun, and complete relative clauses.