Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更自然、简洁并注意语法与重复。可用一到两句主题句直接回应，然后用一至两句补充具体细节并用连接词衔接。注意复数、冠词和动词形式（例如：take pictures, landscapes）。避免重复词汇（如“I I”）。

例: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, I often take pictures of natural landscapes because they make me feel calm and relaxed, and I also photograph interesting buildings to capture architectural details.

提案: 句子结构混乱且有冗余，应先直接陈述偏好，再给出简洁原因并用连接词衔接。修正语法（e.g. "rural landscapes", "I prefer rural views"），避免碎片句和重复。

例: I prefer rural views because I already live in a busy city. Therefore, peaceful countryside landscapes feel more refreshing and interesting to me.

提案: 答案语法错误较多且表达不够连贯。首先直接给出偏好，然后用清晰的原因并举具体例子。注意主谓一致（China has），去掉重复词（"the the"），并改进词汇搭配（"attractive to me"）。

例: I prefer views in my own country because China is so large and diverse. For example, the snowy landscapes in the northeast are very beautiful and attractive to me since I come from the south and don't often see snow.

× Yes, of course I I like to take picture for different things.

✓ Yes, of course I like to take pictures of different things.

原句中的 picture 應為複數 pictures，因為說話者表達的是習慣性地拍攝多個不同的東西，需用複數形式。另外 of 比 for 更常用於表示拍攝的目標，應改為 take pictures of。建議：當表示多個項目或習慣性的動作時使用複數名詞（pictures）。

× For example I always take picture for natural landscape because it can make me feel calming and relaxing and I also take picture for buildings.

✓ For example, I always take pictures of natural landscapes because they make me feel calm and relaxed, and I also take pictures of buildings.

原句中有多處介詞和數量使用不當：① take picture for 應改為 take pictures of，表示拍攝對象；② natural landscape 應用複數 landscapes 表示不同的景觀；③ because it can make me feel calming and relaxing 中的 it 指代不明，且 calming/relaxing 為形容詞應用在感受上更自然，改為 they make me feel calm and relaxed；整體句首也需加逗號分隔。建議：注意介詞搭配（take pictures of）和主詞代詞一致，以及選用正確形容詞形式。

× and I also take picture for buildings.

✓ and I also take pictures of buildings.

同樣是複數問題：拍攝多個建築物時應使用複數 pictures，且介詞用 of 更常見（take pictures of buildings）。建議：複數名詞與動作的對象一致使用。

× I prefer the rural areas landscape because I already live in the modern city so rural things are more especially for me so I prefer to. View in rural.

✓ I prefer rural landscapes because I already live in a modern city, so rural scenes are more special to me.

句中多處數量與詞序問題：① the rural areas landscape 用法不正確，應為 rural landscapes 或 rural scenes（複數）以表示多種鄉村景觀；② a modern city 比 the modern city 更合適，因為說話者指自己所居住的一個城市；③ more especially 用法不當，應改為 more special to me；最後的片語 "View in rural." 不完整，需與前句合併為完整句子。建議：使用複數表達多樣景觀，注意冠詞 a/the 的使用和完整句子結構。

× I prefer view in my own country because China have a big area that the the different location have different things.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because China has a large area and different locations have different things.

原句存在冠詞與動詞一致問題：① I prefer view 應為 I prefer views（複數）或 I prefer the views；② China have 應為 China has（主語為單數國家，動詞須一致）；③ the the 重複錯誤需刪除；④ different location 應為 different locations（複數）。建議：注意名詞單複數和主語與動詞的一致（China → has）。

× For example in northeast the snow is a snow thing is really beautiful and attracting me because I'm a South.

✓ For example, in the northeast the snow is really beautiful and attracts me because I'm from the south.

此句有第三人稱單數動詞形式錯誤與其他問題：① "is a snow thing is" 結構混亂，應刪除冗餘部分，直接說 the snow is really beautiful；② attracting me 用法不當，應用第三人稱單數動詞 attracts（the snow attracts me）；③ I'm a South 用法錯誤，表示來自南方應說 I'm from the south；另外地名前加 the（the northeast）更自然。建議：簡化句子結構，注意第三人稱單數動詞 s 的使用以及固定片語（from the south）。