Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer repeated the examiner's question and did not respond. To improve, always give a clear opinion or experience in one topic sentence and add one or two brief supporting details. Use linking words if you add details. For example, start with “Yes, I do” or “No, I don’t,” then explain why and give a specific example.

例: Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views because I enjoy capturing interesting shapes and colours. For instance, when I travel I often photograph city skylines or seaside sunsets to remember the atmosphere.

提案: Your answer is unclear and does not address the question. To improve, give a direct preference in the first sentence and then support it with a specific reason and a short example. Use linking words such as “because” or “so” to connect ideas and keep the response to no more than five sentences.

例: I prefer views in rural areas because they feel more peaceful and natural. For example, I enjoy photographing rolling hills and fields of flowers, which help me relax and create striking photos.

提案: Your answer is unintelligible and does not answer the question. To improve, state your clear preference in one sentence and then give a reason or a brief example to make your answer specific and relevant. Use simple, correct vocabulary (e.g., “my country,” “other countries,” “scenery,” “culture”).

例: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different landscapes and cultural scenes I cannot find at home. For example, I loved the coastal cliffs I saw abroad last year, which were very different from the beaches in my country.

× Do you like taking pictures of different views?

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.

The student's reply repeats the examiner's question rather than answering; this is a sentence structure and pragmatic issue. Provide a clear declarative response that matches the question (subject + verb + object). Use present simple to express habits or preferences: 'I like taking pictures of different views.' You can add 'Yes' for a natural conversational answer.

× Do you prefer wheels in open after all?

✓ Do you prefer views in open areas or in cities?

The student's sentence is unintelligible and does not match the examiner's question. This is a sentence structure and word choice error. Replace the incorrect word 'wheels' with 'views' to match the question, and use 'open areas' (or 'rural areas') and 'cities' (or 'urban areas') as clear, parallel options. Keep the question form 'Do you prefer X or Y?' to match the original tense and meaning.

× Leave you before wheels in your other countries are in other.

✓ Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

The student's reply is grammatically incorrect and does not answer the examiner's question. This is a sentence structure and word choice error. Restore the intended question structure 'Do you prefer X or Y?' and correct words: use 'views' not 'wheels', and 'your own country' versus 'other countries.' Ensure correct word order and parallel structure for clarity.