Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更直接并注意语法与用词错误。可以用1句主题句回答喜好，再用1-2句举例说明拍照的原因或带来的感受。避免重复表达，注意单词拼写（reviews→views/ memories）和句子连贯。建议语句不超过5句，使用连接词如 because / so / and then 提高流畅性。

例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me preserve special memories. For example, when I visit a scenic spot I often take wide shots of the landscape and close-ups of interesting details, so I can share them with friends and remember how I felt.

提案: 回答应直接表明偏好并提供具体原因与细节，注意语法（例如“I prefer the countryside”而非“I prefer like country”），时态与主谓一致。可以用连接词 like because / which makes me / so 来增强连贯性，注意句子不要过短或不完整。

例: I prefer rural views because the countryside has mountains and rivers that make me feel calm. For instance, walking by a river or looking at distant hills helps me relax and clear my mind.

提案: 回答要更有条理：先给出总体偏好，然后说明至少一两个具体原因并举例。注意词序和搭配（例如“other countries”前加冠词或指代，使用“my own country”），避免重复‘can’的滥用。使用连接词 such as however / also / because 来组织句子。

例: I generally prefer views in other countries because travelling abroad allows me to see new landscapes and experience different cultures. For example, I enjoy trying local foods and visiting historic sites, which gives me a deeper understanding of how people live elsewhere.

× Of course, I like taking pictures of different views because I can record the beautiful reviews and I can share photos with my friends after I can think the beautiful phrase and can make me happy.

✓ Of course, I like taking pictures of different views because I can record the beautiful views and share photos with my friends. Afterwards I can think of beautiful phrases which make me happy.

句中使用了不恰当的名词“reviews”及短语结构混乱。应使用“views”（景色）而不是“reviews”（评论）；去掉重复的情态动词“can”并调整句子连贯性，使用“Afterwards I can think of beautiful phrases”表示随后会想到美好的句子，最后用“which make me happy”作定语从句修饰短语。建议：注意名词语义，避免重复冗余的助动词，理清从句关系。

× I prefer like country because I think there are many mountains and rivers.

✓ I prefer the countryside because I think there are many mountains and rivers.

原句中“prefer like country”搭配错误。动词prefer后直接加名词或动词不定式，不能接“like”。另外应使用“the countryside”或“the country”表示乡村。建议：学习常见动词搭配，prefer + 名词/动词-ing，避免误用like。

× It's make me think quiet and I like to see these beautiful views.

✓ It makes me feel calm and I like to see these beautiful views.

主谓不一致：“It”作为主语时谓语应为“makes”而不是“make”。另外“think quiet”不符合表达习惯，改为“feel calm”更自然。建议：注意主语单复数决定动词形式，并使用正确的形容词搭配动词（feel + 形容词）。

× I like in other countries but I also like own country because I want to travel in other country and see many things and I can then eat and I also can look other countries culture.

✓ I like other countries, but I also like my own country because I want to travel to other countries and see many things. I can try different foods and also learn about other countries' cultures.

原句时态与介词使用混乱：“like in other countries”不正确，应该说“I like other countries”；“travel in other country”应为“travel to other countries”；“can then eat”不自然，改为“try different foods”；“look other countries culture”应为“learn about other countries' cultures”并用所有格。建议：注意介词用法（travel to），复数一致（countries），以及更自然的短语搭配（try food, learn about culture）。