Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap daha doğal ve akıcı olmalı; kısaltmalardan kaçının ve nedenleri açık, bir ya iki cümleyle belirtin. Bağlaçlar kullanarak gerekçeyi genişletin ve örnek verin. Ayrıca cümle sayısını 1–3 aralığında tutun ve tekrarları ("that's the reason") önleyin.

例: Not really. I don't enjoy photography because I lack the technical skills and patience it requires. For example, I find adjusting camera settings and waiting for the right light quite difficult, so I usually prefer other hobbies.

提案: Cevap doğrudan ve doğal; ancak dilbilgisi ve akıcılık geliştirilmelidir. Kısaltmaları azaltın, bağlaçlarla nedenleri düzenleyin ve spesifik detay veya örnek ekleyin. Maksimum 3–4 cümleyle cevabı net tutun.

例: I prefer rural areas because you can enjoy natural scenery and wildlife. For instance, I love walking through meadows and seeing birds and wildflowers, which relaxes me. That's why countryside views make me happier than cityscapes.

提案: Cevap fazla genel ve tekrara düşüyor. "My country is the best" gibi genellemeler yerine somut nedenler verin (anılar, kültür, manzaralar). Tekrarlanan kelimeleri düzeltin ve 2–3 cümlede gerekçeyi açıkça ifade edin.

例: I prefer views in my own country because I feel a strong connection to my hometown and its familiar landscapes. For example, the local hills and traditional architecture remind me of childhood memories, so those scenes are more meaningful to me than views abroad.

× Actually, no 'cause I can't. My abilities are not for this hobby and that's the reason.

✓ Actually, no, because I can't. I don't have the ability for this hobby, and that's the reason.

The use of ''cause'' is informal and contracted; use 'because' in formal speech. 'My abilities are not for this hobby' is unnatural; say 'I don't have the ability' or 'I'm not able' to do the hobby. Also add a comma after 'no' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'because' and rephrase to 'I don't have the ability (or skill) for this hobby.'

× Of course, rural areas 'cause you can see the nature, animals, flowers that.

✓ Of course, rural areas, because you can see nature, animals and flowers there.

Replace informal ''cause'' with 'because'. 'the nature' is incorrect; use 'nature' without an article. 'that' at the end is incorrect in this context; use 'there' to refer to rural areas. Also add commas to separate clauses and correct word order. Suggestion: say '...because you can see nature, animals and flowers there.'

× That's makes me happy when I see the nature.

✓ That makes me happy when I see nature.

'That's makes' is ungrammatical: use 'That makes' (subject 'that' plus verb 'makes'). Again, use 'nature' without 'the'. Maintain present simple tense for habitual statements. Suggestion: 'That makes me happy when I see nature.'

× This is the basic reason.

✓ This is the main reason.

'Basic reason' is understandable but 'main reason' is more natural in English. 'The' is not needed before 'main reason' in this short sentence. Suggestion: prefer 'main reason' for clarity.

× I prefer my own country. The first reason is my hometown, and secondly, I I think my country is the best. This is the reason, yeah.

✓ I prefer my own country. First, because of my hometown; second, because I think my country is the best.

Remove the repeated 'I'. Use parallel structure for listing reasons: 'First,...; second,...'. 'This is the reason, yeah' is colloquial and redundant; simplify to a clear explanation. Keep present simple tense. Suggestion: use 'First... Second...' and avoid filler phrases like 'yeah' in a formal answer.'