Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 注意句子時態和語法一致，避免冗長和重複。回答要直接給出主題句（喜歡或不喜歡），然後用1–2個具體理由支持，每個理由用連接詞連貫。控制在最多5句話內，語言自然且精確。

例: Yes, I do enjoy taking pictures of different views. Taking photos helps me remember places and moments, and it also lets me share beautiful scenes with friends. For example, I often photograph sunsets and cityscapes because their colors and shapes are striking. Over time I’ve become more confident about posing and composing shots.

提案: 回答應明確表達偏好（城市或鄉村），並給出2個具體、相關的原因，使用連接詞如“because”或“however”來組織。避免含糊詞、語填充和語法錯誤，保持簡潔。

例: I prefer rural views because they offer fresh air and unspoiled landscapes. However, I also appreciate urban scenes for their architecture and vibrant street life. For instance, I enjoy photographing snowy fields in winter and modern buildings when I visit the city.

提案: 直接回答偏好，並給出具體理由（如熟悉、文化情感、交通方便），避免重複和語法錯誤。用1–2句補充細節或例子，語句要流暢有邏輯。

例: I prefer views in my own country because I know the places well and feel a strong cultural connection. For example, I love photographing coastal villages in the south and snowy mountains in the north, since each region has distinct scenery and atmosphere.

× When I was a child, I'm not very enjoy taking pictures, although my mom were always take the phone, take pictures for me for phones.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't enjoy taking pictures very much, although my mom always took out her phone to take pictures of me.

句中描述过去的情况，应使用过去时。原句使用了“I'm not very enjoy”（现在时且动词形式错误）和“mom were always take”（主谓时态与动词形式错误）。建议：1) 用助动词 did + 动词原形 表示过去否定（didn't enjoy）；2) 表达习惯性过去动作用过去时（always took）；3) take the phone 改为 took out her phone 或 took photos 用更自然表达；4) take pictures for me for phones 结构混乱，改为 take pictures of me。

× But I used to be a shy kid, but nowadays I become more and more outgoing and I like I think it's very meaningful to take.

✓ I used to be a shy kid, but nowadays I have become more and more outgoing and I think taking pictures is very meaningful.

句首提到过去习惯用 used to（正确），后半部分描述现在的状态应使用现在完成时或现在时，原句使用 become（一般现在）和冗余的 I like I think，以及不完整的 to take。建议：1) 用 have become 强调过去到现在的变化；2) 去掉多余的 I like；3) 将不定式不完整的 to take 改为动名词短语 taking pictures，并补充系动词 is。

× Yeah, I think urban viewers, umm, it's more designable and uh, like, but more cozy for many people living the world, living the citizen, many citizens.

✓ Yeah, I think urban views are more designed and are cozier for many city residents.

原句使用 viewers（观众）误用，应为 views（景观）；designable 用法不当，native 表达为 designed 或 well-designed；more cozy 改为 cozier；短语 living the world / living the citizen 结构错误，应为 city residents 或 people living in the city。建议：1) 用 views 或 scenery 表示景观；2) 用 well-designed 或 designed；3) 用 cozier 表示比较级；4) 用 residents 或 people living in the city 表达居住者。

× But rural areas have more fresh air and beautiful snow.

✓ Rural areas have fresher air and beautiful scenery with snow.

原句中 fresh air 连比较级表达可更自然为 fresher air（与城市比较时）；beautiful snow 表达略生硬，通常说 scenery with snow 或 snowy landscapes。建议：1) 若对比城市，用 fresher；2) 用 snowy landscapes 或 scenery with snow 更地道。

× I think I'm preferred views of our own country since I'm not going out very often, going abroad very often, and I enjoyed the picturesque scenery in our country, no matter it's northern or southern, it's different but.

✓ I prefer views of our own country since I don't go abroad very often, and I enjoy the picturesque scenery here, whether in the north or the south — they are different but both beautiful.

原句混合了现在时和过去时（I'm preferred、enjoyed）以及冗余重复（going out very often, going abroad very often）。应使用一般现在时表达喜好（I prefer），否定频率用 don't go abroad，enjoy 用现在时（I enjoy）。no matter it's northern or southern 语法不当，改为 whether in the north or the south，并补足句意。建议：1) 表达习惯或喜好用一般现在时；2) 频率否定用 don't/doesn't；3) 使用 whether ... or ... 引导选择对比。