Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答自然且内容相关，但可以更简洁并加入一些具体细节（如拍摄的具体地点或感受），同时使用连接词使句子更连贯。注意不要重复“when I travel / I love”之类的表达，控制句子数量在五句内。

例: Yes, I enjoy photographing views because photos help me remember special moments. For example, in Tokyo I often shoot neon-lit streets to capture the energetic atmosphere, while at coastal towns I focus on dramatic sunsets to show changing colors. These images remind me of the place’s mood and my feelings at the time.

提案: 回答明确但略显重复与口语化（“actually”，“I really like”）。建议在说明偏好后用一两句具体细节或比较来支持观点，并用连接词（e.g., because, although）提高连贯性。避免混用时态或不完整的表达。

例: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the energy of busy streets and modern architecture. For instance, wandering avenues lined with cafes and boutiques gives me a buzz and lots of photo opportunities, whereas countryside scenes feel calmer and less stimulating to me.

提案: 回答清晰但可以更具体地说明理由（例如哪些景观、哪些体验与本国不同），并使用连接词使论述更有逻辑。避免泛泛而谈或重复词语，控制在最多五句内。

例: I prefer views in other countries because they show different cultures and landscapes I haven’t seen before. For example, visiting old European cities surprised me with diverse architectural details and narrow cobblestone streets, which contrast sharply with the modern skyline back home.

× For example, when I travel, I love to photograph vibrant city streets, historical architecture, or dramatic sunsets to capture different atmospheres.

✓ For example, when I travel, I love photographing vibrant city streets, historical architecture, or dramatic sunsets to capture different atmospheres.

问题类型ID：8（动词 + -ing 形式）。原句中使用不定式 “to photograph” 也可接受，但在此上下文用名词化动名词 “photographing” 更自然、更常见，因为前半句已有动词短语 “I love” 后接动名词或者不定式都可，但连续列举动作时动名词更流畅。建议统一使用动名词形式："I love photographing..."。

× For example, I love to walk along the avenues with cafes and shops, which made me feel more excited rather than the peaceful countryside.

✓ For example, I love to walk along the avenues with cafes and shops, which make me feel more excited than the peaceful countryside does.

问题类型ID：27（主谓一致）和ID：26（句子结构错误）。原句中含有时态和指代不清问题：前半为一般现在时 "I love to walk..."，但从句用了过去时 "made"，造成时态不一致；此外比较结构"more excited rather than the peaceful countryside" 不自然，应改为比较句型 "more excited than the peaceful countryside does" 或省略重复动词改为 "more exciting than the peaceful countryside"。此处保留主语感受，改为与现在时一致并修正比较结构。建议保持时态一致并使用正确比较连词 "than"。

× For example, I enjoy visiting historical European cities and I was surprised by their architectural styles.

✓ For example, I enjoy visiting historical European cities, and I am often surprised by their architectural styles.

问题类型ID：5（过去时问题）和ID：6（现在时问题）。原句将一般喜好（enjoy）与过去的感受（was surprised）混用，导致时态不一致。如果表达一种经常发生的反应，应使用现在时 "am often surprised" 或保持过去时并改动前半句。建议根据意思统一时态：若想表达旅行时常有惊讶感，用现在一般时；若指特定一次经历，应把前半句改为过去时。