Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更自然並注意語法與句子結構。可用一個主句直接回答，再用一到兩句補充細節。避免重複（如多次說“I'd like to take pictures”），並注意動詞形式（memory → remember）。可以加入具體例子說明拍照的目的或場景。

例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, when I visit a new place I often photograph landscapes so I can remember the trip and share the highlights with my family. I especially like capturing sunsets and local architecture to show what made the place special.

提案: 回答需更清晰、有條理，並修正語法與發音錯誤。先直接給出偏好（topic sentence），接着用2句具體原因支持，使用連接詞（because, so, therefore）連接想法。避免不明詞語（如“e-mail painting”）及重複。

例: I prefer rural views to urban ones because countryside scenery feels peaceful and there is more nature. I grew up in a village, so I feel comfortable and nostalgic in rural areas, and I enjoy photographing fields and small villages rather than crowded skyscrapers.

提案: 回答要更自然流暢，注意單複數和冠詞（a/an/the）用法。先明確表態，然後給出兩個具體原因並用連接詞連接。可以舉例說明想看哪類景色或文化差異。

例: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy discovering new landscapes and learning about different cultures. For instance, I would like to photograph traditional markets in Southeast Asia and historic streets in Europe to capture how people live and local customs.

× Yes, I'd like taking pictures of different views.

✓ Yes, I'd like to take pictures of different views.

句子中使用了“I'd like”後接動詞時應接不帶 -ing 的動詞原形（to-infinitive），表示願望或偏好。正確結構是 "I'd like to do"。建議記住固定搭配："I'd like to + to-infinitive"。

× When I go to a new place or some or I say I saw something new, I'd like to take pictures so I can memory the good moment and also I can share with my friends and parents.

✓ When I go to a new place or when I see something new, I'd like to take pictures so I can remember the good moments and also share them with my friends and parents.

原句有多處問題：1) "or some or I say I saw something new" 結構混亂，應改為平行的從句，如 "or when I see something new"（保持時態一致）。2) "memory" 用作動詞不正確，應使用動詞 "remember"。3) "the good moment" 單複數不一致，應為複數 "good moments" 或 "a good moment"。4) "also I can share with my friends and parents" 中缺少賓語，應為 "also share them with my friends and parents"。建議：保持從句結構一致，注意動詞用法與賓語完整。

× So I'd like to take pictures.

✓ So I'd like to take pictures.

此句本身語法正確，僅保留以承接前句內容。沒有需要按錯誤類型更改的地方。

× I prefer we use the rural areas because e-mail painting is the urban areas most are tall buildings and it's too crowded.

✓ I prefer rural areas because in urban areas most buildings are tall and it's too crowded.

原句有多個問題，但根據允許修正的類型，我們針對代詞與句子成分進行了調整：1) "I prefer we use the rural areas" 語序與代詞不當，正確表達為 "I prefer rural areas"。2) "e-mail painting is the urban areas" 顯然為口誤或錯亂表達，應改為描述城市的短語。3) "most are tall buildings" 語序錯亂，應為 "most buildings are tall"。建議：避免在簡單偏好句中引入多餘代詞，保持主詞與賓語清晰，句子分段表達兩個對比原因。

× But in the rural areas I can more close to the nature and I grow up grow up in the countryside so it make me.

✓ But in the rural areas I can be closer to nature and I grew up in the countryside, so it suits me.

錯誤點：1) "I can more close to the nature" 中副詞位置與形容詞比較級使用錯誤，正確應為 "be closer to nature"（use comparative adjective 'closer'，且 'be' 動詞不可省略）。2) "I grow up grow up in the countryside" 時態與重複錯誤，應使用過去式 "I grew up in the countryside"。3) "so it make me" 結構不完整且動詞形式錯誤，應改為 "so it suits me" 或 "so it feels right to me"。建議：注意副詞/形容詞比較級用法，過去經歷用過去式，保持句子完整主謂結構。

× I prefer view in other countries because I want to experience the different sceneries and the different culture.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I want to experience different scenery and different cultures.

錯誤點：1) "I prefer view in other countries" 中名詞數量不當，應為複數 "views"（或使用不可數名詞 'the view' 需改為相應語境），屬於與 -ing 無關但符合單複數問題，這裡同時修正為複數。2) "the different sceneries" 英語中通常用不可數名詞 'scenery' 或複數 'sceneries' 較少，常見表達為 'different scenery'。3) "the different culture" 應為複數 "different cultures" 表示多個國家的文化差異。建議：區分可數與不可數名詞，對國家/文化的複數概念用複數形式。

× So I want to go to another countries to learn more about their culture and get together with other countries people.

✓ So I want to go to other countries to learn more about their cultures and meet people from other countries.

錯誤點：1) "another countries" 中 'another' 只能修飾單數名詞，應改為 "other countries"（複數）。屬於量詞/限定詞使用錯誤。2) "their culture" 應為複數 "their cultures" 或改為 "their culture(s)" 以涵蓋多國文化。3) "get together with other countries people" 句子不自然且缺少介詞連接，正確表達為 "meet people from other countries"。建議：學習 'another' 與 'other' 的區別，使用正確的介詞短語表達與他國人民見面。