Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn rõ ràng nhưng cần tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy dùng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ: "different views", "when I discover a new place"), tránh tiếng ấp úng (uh, umm) và giới hạn số câu tối đa 3-4 câu. Bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể về lý do bạn thích chụp (ví dụ: lưu giữ kỷ niệm, chia sẻ trên mạng xã hội) và dùng liên từ để nối ý.

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. When I discover a new place, I always take photos to capture the moment because they help me remember details and share the experience with friends. For example, I often photograph architectural details and sunsets to preserve the atmosphere.

提案: Câu trả lời có lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp ("wheels" → "views", "rural area" → "rural areas"). Cần trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề rồi giải thích ngắn gọn với các lý do cụ thể. Tránh đặt câu hỏi không cần thiết ở cuối. Dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "so" để nối lý do và thêm ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ: cảnh đồng lúa, không khí trong lành).

例: I prefer views in rural areas because they are peaceful and relaxing, with fresh air and open landscapes. For instance, I enjoy photographing rice fields and small villages because their colors and quiet atmosphere help me unwind.

提案: Ý chính tốt nhưng cần sửa ngữ pháp ("it make" → "they make", "half owned landscape" không rõ nghĩa). Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, giải thích lý do cụ thể và đưa ví dụ: cảnh quen thuộc, giá trị văn hóa, chi phí đi lại. Tránh dùng cụm từ mơ hồ; nếu ý muốn nói đất nước có nhiều cảnh đẹp thì nên nói rõ ràng.

例: I prefer views in my own country because they make me feel refreshed and comfortable, and I know the places well. For example, I like visiting coastal areas and national parks at home where the scenery and local culture are familiar and easy to explore.

× I like taking pictures of different view.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views.

The noun 'view' should be plural because 'different' implies multiple kinds or instances. Use the plural form 'views' to match 'different'. Suggestion: Use plural nouns after words like 'different', 'many', 'several'.

× Umm, when I discovering new place I always uh, take the moment by taking picture.

✓ Umm, when I discover a new place I always, uh, take the moment by taking pictures.

'Discovering' is incorrect after 'when I'; use the base verb 'discover' for present simple in time clauses. Also 'new place' needs an article 'a'. 'Taking picture' should be plural 'taking pictures' to match general action. Suggestion: Use 'when I + present simple' for habitual actions and include necessary articles; use plural for general activities.

× I prefer wheels in rural area because it's peaceful, interesting and comfortable.

✓ I prefer walks in rural areas because they're peaceful, interesting, and comfortable.

'Wheels' seems incorrect in context; likely intended 'walks' or 'views'. Also 'in rural area' needs plural or 'the' article: use 'rural areas' for general preference. 'It's' refers to singular but should match plural 'areas' so use 'they're'. Suggestion: Choose the correct noun for meaning, use plural for general places, and match pronouns to number.

× It it make me feel relaxed?

✓ It makes me feel relaxed.

Subject-verb agreement: for third person singular subject 'it', the verb requires an -s in present simple: 'makes'. Also this is a statement, not a question, so the question mark should be removed. Suggestion: Use correct -s ending for he/she/it in present simple and ensure punctuation matches sentence type.

× I really prefer views in my own country because it make me feel refreshed, relaxed, comfortable.

✓ I really prefer views in my own country because they make me feel refreshed, relaxed, and comfortable.

'Views' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'they' and the verb should be 'make' (not 'make' with singular 'it'). Ensure subject and verb/pronoun agree in number. Also add 'and' before the last adjective for natural listing. Suggestion: Match pronouns and verbs to the noun number and use commas with 'and' in lists.

× My country half owned landscape.

✓ My country is half-owned by landscape. (incorrect meaning) -> My country has a partly owned landscape. -> Better: My country has a varied landscape.

This sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Half owned landscape' is not a standard phrase. Possible intended meanings: 'has a varied landscape' or 'is half covered by natural landscapes'. The corrections show options: use 'has' for possession and choose correct adjective 'varied' or structure 'partly covered by'. Suggestion: Rephrase to a clear, grammatical expression like 'My country has a varied landscape' or 'Much of my country is covered by natural landscape.'