Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Good content and clear reason. To improve, make the answer more concise, use a clearer topic sentence, include a linking word, and add one specific example to make it more vivid. Avoid repeating similar ideas.

例: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because I don't want to miss beautiful landscapes. For example, on a recent hike I photographed a lakeside at sunset, and the photo always reminds me of the orange sky and the calm I felt. This helps me preserve memories from trips and everyday walks.

提案: Clear preference and reasons are given, but language has minor errors and could be tightened. Use correct singular/plural and articles, add a linking word, and provide a brief specific detail about a rural scene you like.

例: I prefer rural views because the countryside offers varied landscapes and a peaceful atmosphere. For instance, I enjoy photographing rolling hills and old farms where the light at dawn creates a warm, nostalgic mood, which city scenes rarely produce.

提案: The answer is understandable but informal and slightly repetitive. Improve by giving a confident topic sentence, correcting grammar (past participle/tense and noun agreement), and adding a specific example or future plan to visit other countries. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

例: I prefer views in my own country because I haven't traveled abroad yet and there are many beautiful landscapes here. For example, I often photograph the coastal cliffs near my hometown, and in the future I hope to capture mountain scenery abroad as well.

× the scenic countrysides offers varied landscapes and peaceful atmospheres.

✓ the scenic countryside offers varied landscapes and peaceful atmospheres.

'Countryside' is an uncountable or singular noun in this context; using the plural 'countrysides' with the singular verb 'offers' causes number mismatch. Change to singular 'countryside' to agree with 'offers', or make both plural and plural verb: 'countrysides offer'. Suggestion: use 'the scenic countryside offers' for natural phrasing.

× Maybe in my own country, because I didn't go to other countries yet and there's a lot of views here and wonderful landscape that you can see here.

✓ Maybe in my own country, because I haven't been to other countries yet, and there are a lot of views and wonderful landscapes to see here.

Multiple issues: tense and pronoun/verb forms. 'Didn't go to other countries yet' mixes past simple with 'yet' — present perfect is appropriate: 'haven't been'. 'There's a lot of views' uses singular 'there's' with plural 'views' — use 'there are'. 'Wonderful landscape' should be plural 'landscapes' to match 'a lot of views' or use 'wonderful landscape' with appropriate article. Also removed repeated 'here' and changed 'that you can see here' to concise 'to see here'. Suggestion: use present perfect for experiences not done yet and ensure subject-verb number agreement and parallel plural forms.

× When I take photos of scenery during trips or walks, they bring back memories of that moment and the feelings I had.

✓ When I take photos of scenery during trips or walks, they bring back memories of the moment and the feelings I had.

Minor article use: 'that moment' is acceptable but 'the moment' is more natural when referring to a specific captured moment. Tense is acceptable; keeping past 'had' is fine because feelings were experienced at that time. Suggestion: use 'the moment' for clarity and natural phrasing.

× Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because I don't want to miss beautiful landscapes.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because I don't want to miss beautiful landscapes.

Sentence is grammatically correct. Present participle 'taking' is used properly after 'love'. No correction necessary.

× I often like to photograph these scenes since they capture strong emotions and memories that city views rarely provide.

✓ I often like photographing these scenes, since they capture strong emotions and memories that city views rarely provide.

Original sentence is acceptable, but 'like photographing' is more idiomatic than 'like to photograph'. No grammatical error per the provided list; suggested rephrasing improves fluency. Suggestion: prefer gerund after 'like' for natural speech.