Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the response more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and finish the sentence. Focus on correct tense and plural forms.

例: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, especially when I travel. For example, I often take landscape shots of coastlines or city skylines because they capture the atmosphere of the trip. When I look back at those photos, they remind me of specific memories and feelings from that time.

提案: Provide a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then support it with specific reasons linked by connectors. Use plural and article forms correctly and avoid vague phrases like "the viewing is good."

例: I prefer photographing urban views because city skylines and architectural details create striking compositions. For instance, I enjoy shooting illuminated skyscrapers at night and capturing interesting facades during the day, which often result in more dynamic and dramatic photos.

提案: Give a clearer, more precise answer. Start with a topic sentence explaining that your preference varies, then give one or two specific examples or reasons, using linking words to show contrast (e.g., "however"). Correct word choice (e.g., "appreciate" instead of "claim").

例: It depends on my mood: sometimes I prefer rural views because peaceful landscapes and natural light help me relax. However, I also appreciate urban scenes for their energy and architectural variety, so I often choose the location based on what I want to capture.

× Yes, I enjoy taking a picture of different view especially when I travel.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel.

The nouns 'picture' and 'view' need to be plural because the speaker refers to multiple instances in general. Use 'pictures' and 'views' for general habits. Also add a comma before 'especially' for clarity.

× Taking a picture reminds me good memory and atmosphere at that time and when I look back the picture it.

✓ Taking pictures reminds me of good memories and the atmosphere at that time, and when I look back at the pictures, I remember it.

This sentence has several issues: 'reminds me good memory' requires the preposition 'of' and plural 'memories' for general reference (singular/plural issue too). 'Atmosphere' needs the article 'the' to specify that time. The clause 'when I look back the picture it' is ungrammatical: use 'look back at the pictures' and complete the thought 'I remember it' or 'I recall it.' The correction changes verbs into appropriate forms and adds necessary prepositions and articles.

× Well, I would say I like taking a picture in urban area because there's something about skyline at night and the great architecture in the city and also the viewing is good.

✓ Well, I would say I like taking pictures in urban areas because there's something about the skyline at night and the great architecture in the city, and also the view is good.

Use plural 'pictures' and 'urban areas' for general preference. Prepositions and articles: 'about skyline' needs 'about the skyline'; 'viewing is good' is unnatural—use 'the view is good.' Also add commas to separate ideas. This corrects preposition and article usage and plurality.

× Well, it depends on how I'm feeling.

✓ Well, it depends on how I'm feeling.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct. It is included to show it meets the requested checks.

× Sometime I prefer the rural area, but on the other hand I claim the experience in the urban area.

✓ Sometimes I prefer rural areas, but on the other hand I enjoy the experience in urban areas.

Use 'Sometimes' (adverb) instead of 'Sometime.' Use plural 'rural areas' and 'urban areas' when speaking generally. 'Claim the experience' is incorrect collocation; use 'enjoy the experience' or 'prefer the experience.' This fixes adverb form, plurality, and word choice.