Views— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
受験者
Yes, absolutely. I've always loved photography and own a camera, so I often take photos when I'm on holiday or when I whenever I see a beautiful landscape. I like to capture those moments so that I can always remember what them when I pull out the picture.
試験官
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
受験者
To be honest, I prefer the views in urban areas because the tall buildings and the lively streets have left a lasting impression on me. For example, I love walking past the Central Market and the skyline at the sunset, which makes the city feels vibrant and full of energy.
試験官
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
受験者
I definitely prefer the views in my own country Co because they include impressive cultural and historical sites such as such as. These places left a last impression on me not because not only because of their architecture but also their the stories behind them.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
スコア: 72.0提案: Câu trả lời tự nhiên nhưng có lỗi lặp từ và một vài lỗi ngữ pháp/ngữ cảnh khiến ý không rõ ràng. Nên tránh lặp từ như “when I whenever” và bố cục câu cần gọn hơn: mở đầu trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó đưa 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (khi nào, tầm quan trọng). Dùng liên từ hợp lý để nối ý và sửa lỗi đại từ "what them". Giữ độ dài tối đa 5 câu.
例: Yes, I do. I love photography and I usually carry my camera on holidays, so I often photograph landscapes I find striking. For example, last summer I spent an afternoon capturing the light over a coastal cliff, which helps me remember the atmosphere whenever I look at the photos.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
スコア: 78.0提案: Trả lời rõ ràng và có ví dụ cụ thể, tuy nhiên có lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp (“makes the city feels” sai) và có thể thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể hơn để tăng tính đặc thù (mô tả màu sắc, tiếng động, cảm xúc). Dùng liên từ phù hợp để kết nối câu và tránh các cụm từ thừa. Giữ độ dài 3-4 câu là hợp lý.
例: I prefer urban views because tall buildings and busy streets fascinate me. For instance, walking past the Central Market at sunset, I enjoy the golden light on the skyline and the bustling atmosphere, which makes the city feel vibrant and energising.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
スコア: 60.0提案: Câu trả lời thiếu trôi chảy, có nhiều lỗi lặp và lỗi ngữ pháp/ cú pháp (thừa từ "Co", lặp "such as such as", "last impression", "not because not only", "their the"). Cần trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó đưa 1-2 ví dụ cụ thể về địa điểm hoặc câu chuyện lịch sử kèm lý do rõ ràng. Sửa ngữ pháp (use 'not only... but also') và loại bỏ từ thừa. Giữ câu ngắn, rõ ràng và liên kết bằng cấu trúc phù hợp.
例: I prefer the views in my own country because they feature rich cultural and historical sites. For example, the old town near my city has centuries-old temples and stories about local festivals, so I appreciate these places not only for their architecture but also for the traditions behind them.
文法
× I often take photos when I'm on holiday or when I whenever I see a beautiful landscape.
✓ I often take photos when I'm on holiday or whenever I see a beautiful landscape.
The sentence contains a redundant conjunction 'when' before 'whenever'. Remove the extra 'when' so the clause correctly uses the -ing context with 'whenever'. Suggestion: use only 'whenever' for repeated events (I often take photos whenever I see...).
× I like to capture those moments so that I can always remember what them when I pull out the picture.
✓ I like to capture those moments so that I can always remember them when I pull out the pictures.
The phrase 'remember what them' is ungrammatical due to wrong word order and an extraneous 'what'. Remove 'what' and place 'them' after 'remember'. Also pluralize 'picture' to 'pictures' to match context. Suggestion: use 'remember them when I pull out the pictures.'
× For example, I love walking past the Central Market and the skyline at the sunset, which makes the city feels vibrant and full of energy.
✓ For example, I love walking past the Central Market and seeing the skyline at sunset, which makes the city feel vibrant and full of energy.
'Makes' requires a bare infinitive or adjective complement: use 'feel' not 'feels'. Also 'the skyline at the sunset' is awkward; use 'seeing the skyline at sunset'. Suggestion: use 'which makes the city feel...' and 'at sunset'.
× I definitely prefer the views in my own country Co because they include impressive cultural and historical sites such as such as.
✓ I definitely prefer the views in my own country because they include impressive cultural and historical sites.
The sentence has a stray 'Co' and a duplicated phrase 'such as such as'. Remove 'Co' and the duplicate. If examples are needed, add them after 'such as'. Suggestion: '...sites such as the Old Temple and the National Museum.'
× These places left a last impression on me not because not only because of their architecture but also their the stories behind them.
✓ These places left a lasting impression on me not only because of their architecture but also because of the stories behind them.
Use the adjective 'lasting' (not 'last') with 'impression'. The contrast structure should be 'not only... but also...'. Include 'because of' before 'the stories' and remove the extra 'the'. Suggestion: 'left a lasting impression... not only because of their architecture but also because of the stories behind them.'
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