Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 用简洁的主题句直接回答问题，减少犹豫词（如 uh, umm），并用一到两句具体理由或例子支持观点。注意语法（e.g. don't like taking, not don't like to taking）和句子连贯性。目标答案不要超过5句。

例: No, I don't usually take many pictures of the same view because one good photo is enough to capture the scene. For example, when I visit a park I normally take one clear shot rather than dozens, which saves time and helps me focus on enjoying the moment.

提案: 开头直接回答并用一两句具体原因支持。减少语法错误（e.g. 'urban areas', 'let me relax', 'beautiful scenery'），使用连接词提升连贯性。可加入一个简短例子来增强说服力。保持不超过5句。

例: I prefer urban views because the city landscape and architecture inspire me and help me relax. For instance, looking at a lively street or a skyline makes me imagine daily life there and gives me creative ideas for photography.

提案: 直接回答并用并列结构说明两者的吸引点，注意语法与搭配（e.g. 'both' 后用完整句子，'other countries' culture', 'I enjoy travelling'). 避免重复与口头语，使用连接词如 'because' 或 'also' 提升逻辑性。

例: I prefer both my own country and other countries because each offers something different. For example, my country has familiar natural landscapes that feel comforting, while foreign cultures and sights excite me and broaden my perspective when I travel.

× Actually, I don't really like to taking picture of different views of some other things.

✓ Actually, I don't really like taking pictures of different views or other things.

本句错误在于动词不定式“to taking”是不正确的搭配。动词“like”后可接动名词（-ing）或不定式，但不能同时出现“to + -ing”。另外，“picture”应使用复数“pictures”，并用“or”替代“of”来连接并列项。建议记住：like + ving 或 like + to do，两种结构不能混用；可把可数名词用复数或加冠词。

× It's because I think that, uh, you just only take one picture for it is enough.

✓ It's because I think that you only need to take one picture; that is enough.

原句存在主谓搭配和冗余词序问题。“you just only take”中“just”和“only”重复且位置不自然，且中文习惯应表达为“you need to take one picture”或“one picture is enough”。此外“for it is enough”语序不正确，改为“that is enough”更自然。建议学习常用表达：one is enough/that is enough，避免重复副词。

× Actually, I prefer the views in the urban area.

✓ Actually, I prefer views in urban areas.

此处应使用一般现在时表习惯性喜好，原句“the urban area”过于具体且与问题泛指城市或乡村景观不符。更自然的是复数形式“urban areas”或不加定冠词的“in urban areas”。建议在表达偏好时使用一般现在时，并注意可数名词单复数与定冠词的使用。

× It's because of I think the environment pictures can let me more relax and can let me think about how could happen if I was standing in this beautiful sceneries.

✓ It's because I think landscape pictures can help me relax more and make me imagine what could happen if I were standing in these beautiful scenes.

句中存在多处介词和结构错误："It's because of I think" 不正确，应该直接用"It's because I think"；"the environment pictures" 更自然为"landscape pictures"或"environmental pictures"；"can let me more relax" 应用动词短语"help me relax more"或"make me more relaxed"；"how could happen if I was" 语序错误且虚拟语气应使用"if I were"；"this beautiful sceneries" 名词与指示代词不一致且复数应为"these beautiful scenes"。建议注意固定搭配（help/let/make + 人 + 动词原形），条件句中虚拟语气使用 were，名词与代词保持数的一致。

× And so I like it.

✓ So I like them.

前文提到的是“views”或“pictures”（复数），因此指代用复数代词“them”更合适；同时保持一般现在时表偏好。建议注意代词与先行词数的一致。

× Actually I prefer both, it's because not only in our country have beautiful sceneries but other countries cultural can let me very exciting to see it.

✓ Actually, I prefer both, because not only does our country have beautiful scenery, but other countries' cultures also excite me.

原句量词和结构混乱："prefer both" 后面的解释要用“because”而非“it's because”重复；"not only in our country have" 语序错误，使用倒装应为"not only does our country have"或更简单的"not only does my country have"；"beautiful sceneries" 不自然，通常用不可数名词"scenery"；"other countries cultural" 应为所有格或复数名词"other countries' cultures"；"can let me very exciting to see it" 语法错误，应改为"also excite me"或"make me very excited to see them"。建议学习not only... but also结构的倒装规则，名词不可数/可数用法，以及所有格表示所属关系。

× So act. Actually I am a person that very like to traveling around the world so other country can cheer me up.

✓ Actually, I am someone who really likes traveling around the world, so other countries cheer me up.

原句结构混乱并有多个语法错误："So act." 无意义应删除；"a person that very like to traveling" 中关系代词和动词形式错误，正确为"someone who really likes traveling"（like 后接动名词或者不定式，但常用 like + -ing）；"other country can cheer me up" 数与所有格错误，应为复数"other countries cheer me up"，且一般现在时更合适。建议梳理主从句结构，使用正确的关系代词（who）并注意时态和主谓一致。