Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Work on grammar, sentence structure and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, use correct subject-verb agreement and pronouns, avoid repetition, and limit to 2–4 concise sentences. Add one or two specific details (where or what kind of views) with a linking word for coherence. Pronunciation errors are not assessed here but practice speaking smoothly.

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, when I visit tourist spots with dramatic landscapes or cityscapes, I take photos to capture the scenery. Also, I often post my favorite shots on Instagram because I like sharing beautiful places with friends.

提案: Give a direct topic sentence saying your preference, then support with 1–2 specific reasons using linking words (for example, because, also). Correct grammar (prepositions, articles, plural/singular) and avoid repeating words. Be concise and specific about what urban views you like.

例: I prefer views in urban areas. This is because cities often have interesting architecture, parks and lively streets that provide varied photo opportunities. For instance, I enjoy photographing modern buildings and tree-lined boulevards when I explore a city.

提案: Make a clear choice or say you like both, then explain briefly why with a specific example. Use a topic sentence and one supporting sentence with a linking word (for example, because or however). Correct repetition and pronoun use.

例: I like views both in my own country and abroad. For example, I appreciate familiar landscapes at home because they remind me of my hometown, but I also enjoy discovering new scenery in other countries because it feels exciting and different.

× Yes, I likes to take me picture of a different view.

✓ Yes, I like to take my picture of a different view.

The subject 'I' requires the base form of the verb 'like' (not 'likes'), and the correct possessive pronoun is 'my' rather than 'me'. Use 'I like' and 'my picture' to match subject-verb agreement and correct pronoun form.

× When for example when you are going to any tourist place and there are too much good view, I likes to take my picture on that you very much.

✓ For example, when you go to a tourist place and there are many beautiful views, I like to take pictures there very much.

The original sentence has redundant 'when', incorrect verb form 'are too much good view', wrong quantifier 'too much' for countable 'views', and incorrect word order 'take my picture on that you'. Corrections: remove duplicated 'when', use simple present 'you go', use 'many beautiful views', 'like' for subject 'I', and 'take pictures there' for natural phrasing.

× I likes the different difference you picture very much because I am good for posting my photos on Instagram with different different view.

✓ I like the different kinds of pictures very much because I often post my photos on Instagram with different views.

'I' requires 'like' not 'likes'. 'Different difference you picture' is unclear; replace with 'different kinds of pictures'. 'I am good for posting' is incorrect—use 'I often post' or 'I like posting'. Avoid repeating 'different'. Use plural 'views' for countable noun.

× That's why I like to to be taking picture.

✓ That's why I like to take pictures.

Double 'to' is incorrect and 'to be taking picture' is awkward. Use the infinitive 'to take' plus plural 'pictures' for natural expression: 'I like to take pictures.'

× I like to I prefer to use in urban area because their urban area there are too much greenery and other things which are not in rural area which we don't find in rural areas.

✓ I prefer urban areas because they have a lot of greenery and other things we don't find in rural areas.

Original repeats phrases and misuses 'use in urban area' and 'their urban area'. Use 'I prefer urban areas' and 'they have a lot of greenery'. Use 'a lot of' for quantity with uncountable 'greenery', and simplify relative clauses.

× That's why I prefer to take good views in urban areas.

✓ That's why I prefer to take good photos of urban views.

The phrase 'take good views' is incorrect—people 'take photos' or 'take pictures' of views. Use 'take good photos of urban views' to make the object clear.

× I prefer in in my country and in other countries also in other countries.

✓ I prefer both my own country and other countries.

The original repeats 'in' and 'other countries' and has awkward word order. Use 'I prefer both my own country and other countries' for clarity and conciseness.