Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 句子语法和时态需要修正，表达应更自然简洁。建议先用主题句直接回答，然后用一到两句具体细节支持，避免冗长和重复词（如“memorize a lot of tourism things”）。注意冠词和动词形式（例如："take"→"taking"或"take photos"），使用连接词使句子流畅。

例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me remember the places I visit. For example, I often photograph interesting buildings or landscapes so I can recall the atmosphere and details later.

提案: 表达要更直接并修正语法错误。先说出偏好（urban或rural），然后用1–2个具体原因支持，使用连接词（because, so, therefore）。注意名词和形容词单复数（"landscape are"→"landscapes are"）以及不必要的单词（如孤立的"Air."）。

例: I prefer photographing rural areas because the landscapes are closer to nature and the countryside feels peaceful. For instance, I like capturing rolling hills and quiet villages that show local life.

提案: 句子应更简洁且逻辑更清晰。先直接回答，然后给出具体原因并用连接词（because / so）。避免口语不自然的表达（如"need two extra"）。可以给出具体例子说明为什么国外风景更吸引你。

例: I prefer photographing views in other countries because I want to learn about different cultures and see new scenery. For example, when I travel abroad I take pictures of local festivals and architecture that I haven't seen at home.

× Yes, I like take a photo with different views because I want to memorize a lot of tourism things I like and which can make me more deep to recall this experience.

✓ Yes, I like taking photos of different views because I want to remember many tourist things I like, which can help me recall the experience more vividly.

错误类型：动词 + -ing 形式以及名词和短语搭配问题。解释：动词 like 后面应接动名词 taking，而不是不定式 take；photo 与复数语境搭配应为 photos；短语搭配中应使用 remember 而非 memorize（更自然），并将 ‘tourism things’ 改为 ‘tourist things’ 或更好 ‘sights’。句子中 also 有从句衔接问题，用 which 引导非限制性定语从句更通顺。建议：在 like 后使用动名词形式（like doing）；注意可数名词复数形式；使用更地道的搭配如 remember / sights / recall the experience vividly。

× In my eyes I prefer to take photo with rural areas because I think here landscape are more close to nature and I like the countryside. Air.

✓ In my opinion, I prefer to take photos in rural areas because I think the landscapes here are closer to nature and I like the countryside air.

错误类型：介词使用不当和名词复数/形容词搭配问题。解释：短语 ‘In my eyes’ 更常用的是 In my opinion；take photos 后常用介词 in 表示在某地拍照，而不是 with；landscape 为可数名词，应使用复数 landscapes；形容词短语应为 closer to nature；最后的 ‘Air.’ 位置不当，应并入前句 ‘countryside air’。建议：使用固定表达 In my opinion；拍照用 take photos in + 地点；注意名词单复数与形容词比较级搭配；将零散词合并入主句。

× I prefer to take photo with other countries because I want to know about more their different cultures and beautiful things and I already have plenty of photos of my country so I don't need two extra.

✓ I prefer to take photos in other countries because I want to learn more about their different cultures and beautiful places, and I already have plenty of photos of my own country, so I don't need any more.

错误类型：介词使用不当及量词搭配问题。解释：拍照应说 take photos in other countries 而不是 with；learn more about 表达比 know about more 更自然；‘beautiful things’ 更常说 beautiful places 或 sights；‘two extra’ 用法不自然，应改为 any more / any extra 表示不需要更多照片；另外注意 'my country' 前可加 own 用来强调。建议：使用固定搭配 learn more about；将 with 改为 in；用 any more 表达不再需要更多。